Really cool idea and I enjoyed viewing these.
As for a crit, the thing that I would like to see done differently is that in all but the shot with the closed eyes, the woman appears to be quite alive. It may be your intent to have her alive, in which case ignore my crit. But for authenticity, I'd like a less "alive" stare in order to convince me she's dead. Possibly a bit of rolling the eyes upward and not making contact with the camera.
The last shot, however, where she is clearly alive, is my favorite. The slight blue toning on these with the rest of the processing is great fun to view.
-Tim
I think The most obvious critique here is that there are issues with the framing choices for, I would say
every single image posted. Compare it with the similar shoot in question and it becomes obvious as well.
Suggestions - You may want to re-frame it and you may want to use another as appropriate. I would
also look at the lighting carefully as it has issues too.
