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Bob Jarman
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p.1 #1 · Bathing - SFW

Thoughts & comments appreciated...curious specifically about composition and balance - I know the shower curtain is not straight - it is what it is.

Thanks,

Bob

Sep 02, 2011 at 06:10 PM

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p.1 #2 · Bathing - SFW

Great capture! Love it. The shower curtain is fine. With the old-fashioned plumbing, I went for an old-fashioned camera treatment (Polaroid-ish).


	http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/174/bathy.jpg

Perhaps crop a little off top and bottom ... though I do like your crop.


	http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/7270/bath2.jpg

Sep 02, 2011 at 06:51 PM

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p.1 #3 · Bathing - SFW

AuntiPode and Peano2,

Thank you for looking and the re-works....still a work-in-progress.

Bob

Sep 04, 2011 at 11:26 AM

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p.1 #4 · Bathing - SFW

Maybe a w-i-p but all the variations are cute as hell! I do like the desaturated/color-shifted variations Peano provided.
Scott

Sep 06, 2011 at 09:43 AM

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p.1 #5 · Bathing - SFW

Great shot.Reminds me of a Norman Rockwell.
If you want to make it look older, you could try a square crop and add a little grain.

Sep 19, 2011 at 11:46 PM

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p.1 #6 · Bathing - SFW

MrChile, OregonGal, AuntiPode,

Thanks for taking the time for re-works and the alternative presentations - at the moment his mother has settled on something near my last post but over time the alternatives will be explored.

At the moment I'm in a photo-processing-funk, need to get out and see something fresh

Bob

Sep 20, 2011 at 06:43 AM

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p.1 #7 · Bathing - SFW

mrchile wrote:
Great shot.Reminds me of a Norman Rockwell.
If you want to make it look older, you could try a square crop and add a little grain.

http://i433.photobucket.com/albums/qq51/mrchile35/564920.jpg

Nice application to a nice portraiture... Love the facial expression...

Sep 21, 2011 at 06:28 AM

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p.1 #8 · Bathing - SFW

oldrattler wrote:
Nice application to a nice portraiture... Love the facial expression...

Thanks for looking and offering comments,

Bob

Sep 25, 2011 at 06:36 AM


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