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Archive 2011 · School portraits

  
 
matsjoa
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p.1 #1 · School portraits


Hey!

A month ago, I was asked to take pictures of all the students at my school (80-ish people) for a slideshow to the last day of school. So I picked out some of the photos and would like som feedback on them, and please, say exactly what you mean. It's from your comments and critics that I will learn!

#1

Yngve Mandal Svendsen by matsj, on Flickr

#2

Elin Marie Andersen by matsj, on Flickr

#3

Gunnar Stålhane by matsj, on Flickr

#4

Charlotte Paulsen by matsj, on Flickr

#5

Kristine Næstby by matsj, on Flickr

#6

Vivian Tvedt by matsj, on Flickr

#7

Anne Grethe Olavsdatter Vold by matsj, on Flickr

#8

Kjetil Olai Torgrimsby by matsj, on Flickr

#9

Mina Hennum Mohesni by matsj, on Flickr

#10

Lisa Turøy Christiansen by matsj, on Flickr



Jun 13, 2011 at 10:20 AM
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p.1 #2 · School portraits


Landscape orientation for all? You do know you can turn your cam, right?

Looks like you were a bit close with a wider angled lens for some of them (1, 2 7, 10). Unless it was for a special purpose, I'd stick to longer lenses for less distortion.



Jun 13, 2011 at 11:19 AM
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p.1 #3 · School portraits


#1. Taken from above him - too far above him.

#2 Nice sharp eyes and good catchlights. The hair was cropped away - try portrait for this one.

#3 Nice shot of him. The background makes this look like a tourist snapshot.

#4 Nice eyes again. Background needs improvement.

#5 Only one eye is getting the light. The hair is making a shadow on the other.

#6 Like jfinite says - turn the camera. There's nothing on the viewer's left side that we want to see. Why is she looking away?

#7 Nice, but turn the camera.

#8 #9 & #10 Turn the camera.

My advice is to consider the background in every shot you take. Plus what jfinite said.



Jun 13, 2011 at 11:38 AM
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p.1 #4 · School portraits


we live in a pretty horizontal world and images are viewed that way often, so that is not a concern for me but I agree with the other crits from Jim for sure.




Jun 13, 2011 at 01:21 PM
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p.1 #5 · School portraits


I really like number 1. It is my favorite of the set. I like the expression, I like the closeness with a wide lens, camera position, it strikes me as a really fun picture. I like 7 mainly because of the fact I can almost hear her laughing...

One thing I noticed in #9 is the "derp-derp" written on the wall. If this was on purpose I'd make it more prominent, otherwise I would search for some cleaner wall-space.






Jun 13, 2011 at 08:36 PM
matsjoa
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p.1 #6 · School portraits


Thank you all for your comments and thoughts, they are appreciated!

Yeah, I tend to forget that I can rotate the camera. Thats a bad habit I got from working in a web publication where 99% of the photos are in landscape orientation.

The gear used is a Canon 1D MK III and a 35mm f/1.4, so thats why some photos have that look. I kinda like it.

Some more information, I had 1 day to shoot 84 people and not much time to plan, so I had to just grab the people and take the shot. And that explains some of the background. Hurry, and wasn't observant enough.

And again, thank you so much for your input. This is the only way I will learn!



Jun 14, 2011 at 03:40 PM





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