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Ted ellis
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I would greatly appreciate your feedback in the pp work of my gps female bald eagle.

Ted




Nov 05, 2009 at 11:14 AM
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Ted, the PP work looks great! I'm not sure about the bg being the right one, though. The original image gives the feel of the Eagle being high in the sky and I'm thinking may be a sky with clouds would work better and would make the shot more "real"
Socrate


P.S. I would also think to add a moon in the sky, if you can, just to make JB happy



Nov 05, 2009 at 12:58 PM
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p.1 #3 · Pastel bg


Great job with the PP Ted, really makes the eagle pop....


Nov 05, 2009 at 01:19 PM
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Hmmmm, first I think you have the yellow oversaturated a bit too much and should be isolated to only the beak not the tail. The tail is normally more of a stained pale yellow IMO.
I like this new BG over the original though I agree it may not be the right one for this shot. Maybe just a bit of a softly faded gradient could work for a BG??

I think you did a great job putting the BG in though, congrats on that!

Karl



Nov 05, 2009 at 01:22 PM
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Hi Ted, I would second the tail being a bit too yellow. I'm not sure about the bg either. Oh heck, I just happen to agree with Karl and he says it so much better

Tim



Nov 05, 2009 at 08:42 PM
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Hi Ted,

You might want to try dropping the yellow saturation to get the beak and rear feathers to look more natural. The contrast improvement and sky pick the photo up to a farmable level.

Morris



Nov 05, 2009 at 08:48 PM
Ted ellis
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p.1 #7 · Pastel bg


Thanks Morris I did lowere the yellow on the tail.

Ted

morris wrote:
Hi Ted,

You might want to try dropping the yellow saturation to get the beak and rear feathers to look more natural. The contrast improvement and sky pick the photo up to a farmable level.

Morris



Tim thanks. as I told Morris I lowered the yellow.

Ted
Tim Kuhn wrote:
Hi Ted, I would second the tail being a bit too yellow. I'm not sure about the bg either. Oh heck, I just happen to agree with Karl and he says it so much better

Tim


Thanks Karl.

Ted

Karl Witt wrote:
Hmmmm, first I think you have the yellow oversaturated a bit too much and should be isolated to only the beak not the tail. The tail is normally more of a stained pale yellow IMO.
I like this new BG over the original though I agree it may not be the right one for this shot. Maybe just a bit of a softly faded gradient could work for a BG??

I think you did a great job putting the BG in though, congrats on that!

Karl


Jim greatly appreciate your reply.

Ted

z06jim wrote:
Great job with the PP Ted, really makes the eagle pop....


Socrate, much thanks to you.

Ted
Shasoc wrote:
Ted, the PP work looks great! I'm not sure about the bg being the right one, though. The original image gives the feel of the Eagle being high in the sky and I'm thinking may be a sky with clouds would work better and would make the shot more "real"
Socrate

P.S. I would also think to add a moon in the sky, if you can, just to make JB happy




Nov 09, 2009 at 11:50 AM
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Karl Witt wrote:
Hmmmm, first I think you have the yellow oversaturated a bit too much and should be isolated to only the beak not the tail. The tail is normally more of a stained pale yellow IMO.
I like this new BG over the original though I agree it may not be the right one for this shot. Maybe just a bit of a softly faded gradient could work for a BG??

I think you did a great job putting the BG in though, congrats on that!

Karl


KarlA said it for me Ted. Nice job w/ the BG.
Dan



Nov 09, 2009 at 01:21 PM
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I like these better than the other thread Ted

a lot more pop. Now - regarding the tail....

I've played with one of the shots from the other thread & the tail feathers are were yellow in that shot from the beginning..... I could not correct it with the small file I have available....

But I like the pop a lot better in these.

Lil



Nov 09, 2009 at 02:52 PM
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Ted, If you look carefully at the edges of the eagle you can see the halo that is present in almost the entire edge. Probably too much unsharp masking.

Norm

PS , not fair using a radio-controlled eagle



Nov 09, 2009 at 03:43 PM
Ted ellis
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Lil Judd wrote:
I like these better than the other thread Ted

a lot more pop. Now - regarding the tail....

I've played with one of the shots from the other thread & the tail feathers are were yellow in that shot from the beginning..... I could not correct it with the small file I have available....

But I like the pop a lot better in these.

Lil



Thank you Lil! Im still working on different versions.

Ted



Nov 10, 2009 at 08:05 AM
Ted ellis
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p.1 #12 · Pastel bg


normsmith wrote:
Ted, If you look carefully at the edges of the eagle you can see the halo that is present in almost the entire edge. Probably too much unsharp masking.

Norm

PS , not fair using a radio-controlled eagle


Norm thanks....I will look again, rework the image again.

Ted



Nov 10, 2009 at 08:06 AM





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