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sinbad747
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p.1 #1 · David & Lindsey :: Engagement Photos


Love to hear your comments and criticism.

1
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3445/3699844115_c4b4e54654.jpg
2
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2473/3700655278_23e5b0d148.jpg
3
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2641/3700655176_044f728e08.jpg
4
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3257/3699843637_351a46886d.jpg
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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3535/3700654928_84eb02b381.jpg
6
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2503/3700654636_fce68fba89.jpg

Thanks for looking!




Jul 08, 2009 at 08:35 AM
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p.1 #2 · David & Lindsey :: Engagement Photos


great series, really like #2 & #5!


Jul 08, 2009 at 09:08 AM
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p.1 #3 · David & Lindsey :: Engagement Photos


I do not like the Creative - Aged Photo LR preset (or similar looking action). #5, for example, would be so much stronger as a sepia or, better still, strong BW. I enjoy the framing in #1.


Jul 08, 2009 at 09:15 AM
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p.1 #4 · David & Lindsey :: Engagement Photos


2 looks uncomfortable for her, unless they were making out, in which case it's uncomfortable for us.

5 is a nice moment. They seem like a happy couple and that's coming across pretty clearly.

Why are you (consistently) so far away from them? The combination of small posted pics + distance between you & them leaves these pics a little cold to me, like something is happening that I'm not a part of.



Jul 08, 2009 at 11:30 AM
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p.1 #5 · David & Lindsey :: Engagement Photos


3 is a good idea. Might brighten it a little and clone out the pole and lilly-pad-over-the-head-in-the-reflection IMHO.


Jul 08, 2009 at 12:02 PM
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p.1 #6 · David & Lindsey :: Engagement Photos



Why are you (consistently) so far away from them? The combination of small posted pics + distance between you & them leaves these pics a little cold to me, like something is happening that I'm not a part of.


This is spot on. While the exposures are nice and the colors are fine overall, the set lacks a sense of intimacy and closeness, IMO.

ken



Jul 08, 2009 at 12:24 PM
sinbad747
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p.1 #7 · David & Lindsey :: Engagement Photos


Thanks Ken and Wolf_boy. Now that you mention it, it does appear a bit voyeuristic. I do need to get closer and more intimate. Thanks all for the comments.


Jul 08, 2009 at 05:07 PM





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