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Archive 2008 · A Day In Training

  
 
kiowa169
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p.1 #1 · A Day In Training


This is how we train to get ready for Iraq or Afghanistan. Please C&C


Sep 08, 2008 at 03:38 PM
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p.1 #2 · A Day In Training


Color is nice, I would frame to just above the door because the top is not adding to the picture. If you have the resolution I would crop just the soldier growing through the door and bring out his face - the man in the white is not adding to the picture.

For me closer to get the facial expression would make this shot.

Generally in action shots you leave more space in front for them to move into - so more on right might be better even though he is going through the door.

Edited on Sep 08, 2008 at 11:48 PM



Sep 08, 2008 at 11:38 PM
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p.1 #3 · A Day In Training


Hey Kiowa169,

I like this one also. I really like the juxtaposition of the arabic person vs. US military person.

Great color.

Ron

BTW are you member of Kiowa nation?



Sep 09, 2008 at 04:46 PM
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p.1 #4 · A Day In Training


Thanks for the comments and tips. Matonanjin, I am not from Kiowa nation. The reason for the name is that I am a mechanic in the Army for the OH-58 Kiowa Warrior. The first helicopter I worked on had number 169 so hence the name.


Sep 10, 2008 at 12:26 PM





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