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Archive 2008 · vista house C&C

  
 
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p.1 #1 · vista house C&C


http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3174/2764199842_993600a80f_b.jpg


Aug 14, 2008 at 06:54 PM
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p.1 #2 · vista house C&C


Pretty scene. Where is this? I like the composition. I'd clone or crop out object extreme left mid-river. Might do a bit of touch up in PS or LS. You might end up with too much shift in mood, but I think the photo would be better with a slight bump in exposure and brightness and increased clarity or local contrast enhancement with USM. I'd also warm it just abit; seems abit too blue.
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Aug 14, 2008 at 07:21 PM
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p.1 #3 · vista house C&C


columbia gorge in oregon,reason for the blue is an haze from the wild fires and a coal firing plant..I tend to like the contrasting green to blue the object is a rock...


Aug 14, 2008 at 08:01 PM
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p.1 #4 · vista house C&C


Thanks.
If nothing else, the rock must go, or be included in a wider crop



Aug 14, 2008 at 08:04 PM
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p.1 #5 · vista house C&C


I just looked at my vacation shots of vista house from last year from a similar vantage point. It appears that the haze is a permanent feature. I like your processing, the trees are very vibrant. From a composition standpoint, since the monument is the focus of the photo it would be nice if it were brighter in the photo compared to the surroundings (i.e. wait for a break in the clouds so the sun is more directly illuminating it.) The shot looks more dramatic as a vertical and the subject larger in the frame. You can crop to get there if you did not shoot it in that orientation with a longer lens.



Aug 14, 2008 at 10:25 PM
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p.1 #6 · vista house C&C


Beautiful spot, great shot. I like the dark moodiness, which is odd since I usually overdo exposure.

One thing kind of bugging me, though: The picture doesn't seem quite level. Yet, I can't figure out in which direction. I kind of think it needs to tilt slightly to the left, despite the odd angle of the house and trees.

-But what's with those trees on the right-half? They are all leaning to the right! Is this some weird perspecitve trick?

Or, perhaps, does your lens have a severe curvature distortion? I'm thinking that might be it.

Maybe I'm seeing things that aren't there, I dunno, but it sure seems odd.

Edited on Aug 19, 2008 at 05:29 AM



Aug 19, 2008 at 05:28 AM





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