Archive 2008 · guild theater sign C&C

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p.1 #1 · guild theater sign C&C

Jul 30, 2008 at 10:52 PM

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p.1 #2 · guild theater sign C&C

Focus good, exposure good, very symetrical.

I think it would be better if you were not looking so high up (longer lens further away).

I think it would also be better if you had the ground for context.

The colors seem muted - I would add some saturation.

Good job - my suggestions might be more my taste (aside from saturation) so wait for more feedback.

Jul 31, 2008 at 08:15 AM

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p.1 #3 · guild theater sign C&C

Actually, I like the muted colors - it plays to the apparent age of the sign (faded, rusted...).

I do agree on the angle. Without the ground context, the angle is distracting. I like the tight crop, but if you could go across the street, get on the second floor, and use a telephoto, you'd really have it pop, I think...

Aug 03, 2008 at 01:15 AM

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p.1 #4 · guild theater sign C&C

color seems good to me, it is an old faded theater.
I think you are too close, maybe try it with a 10-17mm fisheye lens?

Aug 09, 2008 at 01:14 AM


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