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p.1 #1 · Barnside


Especially intrested in feedback on composition.
Thx
Scott

48 mm (24-105L IS), f 8, 1/50s, ISO 100, handheld

Edited on Jun 30, 2008 at 08:37 PM



Jun 30, 2008 at 08:34 PM
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p.1 #2 · Barnside


i really like this, rule of thirds, framing inside the picture, and the yellow and turquoise stand out well against the barn wall, the only thing i would try is maybe cloning out the reflection in the window, i find that it takes away from it a little, other than that its good


Jul 01, 2008 at 07:44 AM
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p.1 #3 · Barnside


Made me chuckle. I like the photo; no worries about the composition. Nice exposure, lots of interesting textures. If it were mine, I'd change the greenish window to a bright blue to fight the yellow paint, but that's a minor quibble.

Bob Kane



Jul 02, 2008 at 07:13 PM
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p.1 #4 · Barnside


Well done Scott.

Looks like an interesting place.

Curious what it would look like if Kaden were to add a little Lomo-osity to it?

regards,

Bob



Jul 02, 2008 at 09:50 PM
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p.1 #5 · Barnside


A small yellow drip line coming off the corner of the paint tray would have made for an interesting leading line. Just a thought.


Jul 03, 2008 at 02:24 AM
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p.1 #6 · Barnside


I like the exposure and the grain and the window and the framing and the focus.

But the paint container turns the picture from pretty to peculiar for me. The two scenes don't fit together.

So for me very strong technically but odd.



Jul 05, 2008 at 12:39 PM
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p.1 #7 · Barnside


Good comp and exposure but the subject does not interest me . To you it may be special though.


Jul 09, 2008 at 10:43 PM
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p.1 #8 · Barnside


Scott Stoness wrote:
I like the exposure and the grain and the window and the framing and the focus.

But the paint container turns the picture from pretty to peculiar for me. The two scenes don't fit together.

So for me very strong technically but odd.


I have to agree with this. I like the window and the barn, but where the paint tray is just isn't natural. If it were sitting on the ground (as if it was just about to be used) I think that would work for me, but you probably wouldn't have the window in frame.

Good colors though.
Ken


Edited on Jul 10, 2008 at 12:52 AM



Jul 10, 2008 at 12:52 AM
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p.1 #9 · Barnside


Interestingly, I was visitng my sister-in-laws friends up in Vermont. The owner of the barn is a master woodworker and the barn is his working studio. He had left the paint and tray where it was captured, balanced from the sill. The contrast/oddness of the scene was what caught my attention. Seems like it works for some and not at all for others. Personally, I think the yellow, accurately captured, is a bit intense.

Thanks for all the feedback.

Scott G

Edited on Jul 11, 2008 at 02:17 PM



Jul 11, 2008 at 12:51 PM
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p.1 #10 · Barnside


Just to comment on the subject matter, as it has been mentioned . . .

Maybe if the paint tray were the same color as something in the picture (indicating that someone had actually been painting something in the photo) it would work better for me.

My first thought was, why is this paint tray here? Maybe I think too much.

Love the textures of the wood and window though.



Jul 12, 2008 at 10:33 AM





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