Neither photo has much in the way of general interest and what there is relies heavily on the title and other photo to put them into context. For me that is a bad thing because they cannot stand on their own.
Geez folks.... well, leave it to me to be the contrarian...lol.
Ericson I personally like the idea and the usage of language to effectuate some
level of immediacy in the reading of the images. Unlike the comments previously
made I differ (or maybe I misunderstood the comments, always a possibility) in
that the first image ought to provide a view of your name (or partial view) so
that the comparisson will work, if that's what you had in mind.