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Kaden K.
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p.1 #1 · Portrait


From the series " No Más":

http://www.pbase.com/dehl/no_ms

#1 - Fujifilm GW690III Pro
#2 & #3 - Yashica 35 GS


Edited on May 21, 2008 at 01:22 AM



May 21, 2008 at 01:14 AM
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p.1 #2 · Portrait


Nice images.
Blacks all look too black on my work monitor (not calibrated).
1. Powerful, effective capture. There is no way not be drawn to his expression and intensity. I also like the division of the image, with a disconnected OOF bystander in a separate scene.

2. Doesnt have the same impact as the first. A bit centered. I'd like to see more of where his attention is being drawn too, or more of the instrument in a portrait mode, or more eye contact.

3. Confusing perspective, geometries= I like! What is the mirrored surface in this image?

Scott G

Edited on May 21, 2008 at 02:29 PM



May 21, 2008 at 02:28 PM
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p.1 #3 · Portrait


As to #3 is the back mirror of a stretch limosine that was plenty shiny too.

Thanks for the comments.


Edited on May 22, 2008 at 12:35 AM



May 21, 2008 at 08:05 PM





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