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p.1 #1 · #294: The Wait

My first post. C&C more than welcome.

May 13, 2008 at 06:11 AM

Beverly Guhl 4-time assignment winner

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p.1 #2 · #294: The Wait

Welcome! I think your general concept is good, but would be better if you showed a person(s) waiting for the bus? Colors are nice; the crop feels like something is missing at the bottom, i.e. a bench? I would have cloned out the street lamp on the left edge, too. I like your perspective and angle.

May 13, 2008 at 01:25 PM

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p.1 #3 · #294: The Wait

Nice color in your first post. Welcome and best of luck.--Frank

May 13, 2008 at 11:43 PM

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p.1 #4 · #294: The Wait

Hi,

I really like the composition and the sky is gorgeous. Excellent first post. Good luck this week.

Steve S.

May 14, 2008 at 12:33 AM

Carrol

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p.1 #5 · #294: The Wait

Beverly Guhl wrote:
Welcome! I think your general concept is good, but would be better if you showed a person(s) waiting for the bus? Colors are nice; the crop feels like something is missing at the bottom, i.e. a bench? I would have cloned out the street lamp on the left edge, too. I like your perspective and angle.

Good advice!

Welcome to the forum.

May 14, 2008 at 10:35 PM


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