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mabidally
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p.1 #1 · Does this work?

Hi folks,

I am more regular on the Nature and Wildlife forum just experimenting with some landscape after a recent visit to South Africa. Will really appreciate your comments on the below shot. I have used a little extreme processng to bring out the effects and colours. Does it work?

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Shores of Robben Island with Table Mountain in Distance

Edited on May 07, 2008 at 09:41 PM

May 07, 2008 at 09:35 PM

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p.1 #2 · Does this work?

I like it. Than again, I usually do quite heavy processing myself. Hard to tell it from the web picture but I would tone down the whites.

Alex

May 07, 2008 at 09:48 PM

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p.1 #3 · Does this work?

The FG seems pretty soft, but that could be compression...the horizon right in the center makes for a static composition: what was it about the scene that made you want other people to see it? Find that element and use your comp tools to feature it. Dave

May 09, 2008 at 09:06 PM

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p.1 #4 · Does this work?

It's not a bad shot, but I don't find it all that interesting. The foreground is a bit busy with the debris and the rocks blending together.

May 09, 2008 at 10:08 PM

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p.1 #5 · Does this work?

For me personally , i'd have walked on ten or so paces and begun from there , or am i missing some enviromental point your putting across ?

May 09, 2008 at 10:19 PM


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