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nick bellotto
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p.1 #1 · old song


the title of this picture is OLD SONG and was taken this sunday in Hong Kong:

on the left you will see an happy old chinese playing the traditional ARHU violin and on the right a young guy is only listening to his mobile phone. I think there is a lot of china on it...

C&C are highly welcome!

ciao
n









Edited on Mar 17, 2008 at 01:11 AM



Mar 17, 2008 at 01:09 AM
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p.1 #2 · old song


i like the idea and over all image. I would suggest a tad bit less vignetting on the sides, I feel like it takes some focus away from the boy on the right!

good work!

Scott



Mar 17, 2008 at 11:54 AM
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p.1 #3 · old song


I agree with Scott re vignetting. Also, the large OOF rock at the bottom is distracting to me.

regards,

Bob



Mar 17, 2008 at 11:58 AM
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p.1 #4 · old song


f1.4 1/8000 iso200 50mm

It has very short depth and looks overexposed (1/8000) and then photshop imprioved

I don't like the short depth, vignetting and softness. The idea and framing is good but you should have come down to iso 100 and f8.

But as you say it does capture china



Mar 17, 2008 at 09:00 PM
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p.1 #5 · old song


thanks to all for the comments!




Mar 17, 2008 at 09:05 PM





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