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p.1 #1 · 271: Attracted Through Dance


Went to a friend's Anglo-Indian wedding reception yesterday and this is an image of one of the dances. It is, evidently, part of a traditional Temple Dance and the attraction for me comes on different levels; firstly I was bowled over by the beauty of the dance and, indeed, the dancers, they were amazing to watch! Secondly the sheer energy, which I hope the picture conveys, was staggering. The third level of attraction was the chemistry that the three dancers had between them, you could immediately tell that they not only enjoyed the dance but were completely one as a dancing entity—beautiful. It was interesting that before they took to the floor a request was made that as this was a Temple dance the dancers would appreciate it if no alcohol was drunk during the dance; the realization that what we were witnessing was essentially a spiritual act was very powerful for me, (the request, incidentally, was honoured by all 200 guests).

I hope you like the image, please feel free to comment.

Edited by Benedictine on Nov 04, 2007 at 02:06 PM GMT (Reason: Resize)







Nov 04, 2007 at 07:23 AM
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p.1 #2 · 271: Attracted Through Dance


Sorry wrong size!







Nov 04, 2007 at 07:25 AM
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p.1 #3 · 271: Attracted Through Dance


Beautiful shot, Andrew, my friend! I love the abstract quality. You've certainly captured an amazing moment. I think it might benefit from a teensy levels adjustment to make it a tad brighter. I think it would really pop then. Whatever you do with it, it's a great shot!

All best wishes,

Endre

PS. Thanks for the PM. I'll get back to you asap.



Nov 04, 2007 at 12:58 PM
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p.1 #4 · 271: Attracted Through Dance


I agree with Endre, really a nice abstract image and very interesting to view. The subdued colors are very pleasant.


Nov 04, 2007 at 09:19 PM
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p.1 #5 · 271: Attracted Through Dance


Thanks Endre and Beverley that is really helpful, the alchemy of processing is a whole new world to me! How's this? Is it better, which do you prefer the original or this one?










Nov 04, 2007 at 11:40 PM
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p.1 #6 · 271: Attracted Through Dance


Hmmm... I prefer the original. The new one has lost a bit of richness that is in the original.

All best wishes,

Endre



Nov 05, 2007 at 02:37 AM
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p.1 #7 · 271: Attracted Through Dance


I like that the guy in the background shows up better in this brighter adjustment, and while Endre has a point about the richness factor I think either image works for different reasons. Maybe you could compromise and split the difference and wind up with an image somewhere between the darker and this lighter? Nice work!


Nov 05, 2007 at 10:04 AM
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p.1 #8 · 271: Attracted Through Dance


Thanks again to you both for your comments, decided to leave it as it is I think. Really appreciate your help, I feel I have learnt from this and that is great.

Cheers.



Nov 05, 2007 at 12:44 PM
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p.1 #9 · 271: Attracted Through Dance


Very eye catching image. The colors in the currently posted (darker) one are so rich. What a sense of movement!

Jamie



Nov 06, 2007 at 11:55 AM
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p.1 #10 · 271: Attracted Through Dance


Thanks jamie, I appreciate your comments. The more I look at the two images the beter I like the first for its richness. Cheers.


Nov 06, 2007 at 02:18 PM
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p.1 #11 · 271: Attracted Through Dance


Great colors in this abstract.--Frank


Nov 06, 2007 at 06:10 PM
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p.1 #12 · 271: Attracted Through Dance


Glad you like them Frank, thanks.


Nov 07, 2007 at 01:16 PM
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p.1 #13 · 271: Attracted Through Dance


This is a very interesting abstract, with great color and motion. The emotion is well captured, too. Beautifully done!

I noticed in your profile that you are a Benedictine oblate. My dad graduated High School from Subiaco Academy, a Benedictine school for boys in Paris, Arkansas. A wonderful bunch of teachers, and so kind. They stayed in touch for years and years, but most of them are gone now. (Dad's 84.)

Just wanted to share that with you.



Nov 07, 2007 at 03:42 PM
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p.1 #14 · 271: Attracted Through Dance


Hi Philly,
Thanks for your comments and it was interesting to hear about your dad, the Benedictine family is a very special thing. Very pleased that you like the photograph.
Regards & best wishes.



Nov 07, 2007 at 11:13 PM





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