Is the last picture supposed to tell a story? Like... somebody is coming, let's stop what we were doing........
#2 is a little ackward too, because her left leg is covered by her hand and is getting lost in the backgroud, it almost looks like she's a one-legged model.
Just my 2 cents.
Fred
Shots are great. I think she looks better with her right eye towards the camera because she squints the left one a little which makes her seem like she has a lazy eye lid and is not proportional. I ran into the same problem when i was shooting my girlfriend with her left eye toward the camera she looked like a half squinting alien.
Anyway i quite like the shots and think the overall color and saturation is great.
onebear wrote:
+1 on lighting.
Would be nice to have a lot less DOF on the rooftop shots. I find myself studying the BG more than them (but maybe itīs just me).
Just my $0.02 Cdn
I agree the you shot roof top at f9 & f11, if you had shot them at f14 or greater the background would have been much darker. Increasing your strobes would allow you to do this.
