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Archive 2008 · comments and critique welcome

  
 
moody_blue
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p.1 #1 · comments and critique welcome


take a look at the 3 photo's


1st photo
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3228/2715564168_4c9ee03602.jpg?v=0

2nd photo

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3157/2715558868_b77e341890.jpg

3rd photo

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3092/2714740199_475059cb3f.jpg

moody

Edited on Jul 30, 2008 at 03:56 PM



Jul 30, 2008 at 01:56 PM
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p.1 #2 · comments and critique welcome


hey are the pics that bad?.. 50views and not even a single critique!

i need to learn guys help out!



Jul 30, 2008 at 09:45 PM
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p.1 #3 · comments and critique welcome


Very good composition.
All 3 are good.

I like the second one best.
Could have cropped a little tighter at the bottom.



Jul 30, 2008 at 09:46 PM
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p.1 #4 · comments and critique welcome


ssuresh98 wrote:
Very good composition.
All 3 are good.

I like the second one best.
Could have cropped a little tighter at the bottom.



On second thought, it looks just fine as it is.



Jul 30, 2008 at 09:48 PM
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p.1 #5 · comments and critique welcome


1 colors are nice, focus is nice, light is nice but I don't like the composition. More bokeh and something hinting behind would be better. As is there is too much depth unless the picture is about the water and too high an angle. As a result there is no obvious subject and message.

2 has nice lines and depth. Depth is good here. Sepia is good too since the sky looks washed out. It might be better with a pillar closer in to give some feeling of depth.

3 has nice focus and depth. The sky color looks off and the building looks a bit flat in color. I would use shadows /curves to bring out the walls. For me the extreme low perspective could be better. Backing up with a longer lens might be better.

2,3 are good but 1 does not work for me.





Jul 30, 2008 at 10:15 PM
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p.1 #6 · comments and critique welcome


thanks, i'll keep your suggestions in mind!


Jul 30, 2008 at 10:24 PM
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p.1 #7 · comments and critique welcome


ok, i am posting the original images i took as well,

so if the more knowledgeable folks can advise me if what i did in post processing was reasonable

1st pic

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3271/2718919806_acba438def.jpg


2nd pic
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3193/2718099889_9d2dbe0b14.jpg

3rd pic

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3263/2718918684_17588f8187.jpg



Jul 30, 2008 at 10:39 PM
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p.1 #8 · comments and critique welcome


I like #1 for the colors, and nonobvious composition. #2 best in my opinion. Sepia is right and photo could be an architectural illustration. #3 seems a little bland, but that could be just me.


Jul 30, 2008 at 11:13 PM
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p.1 #9 · comments and critique welcome


What's the interest in number one? Is it the juxtaposition of the muted blue water against the green leaves? As a composition it doesn't speak to me and the color contrast isn't enough for me. I like the composition of number 2. I also like number 3 best. The pastel blue is soothing and the composition of three different types of rectangular repeating shapes in the glass and brickwork appeals to me.


Aug 08, 2008 at 06:33 AM
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p.1 #10 · comments and critique welcome


What AuntiPode said.

Ron



Aug 08, 2008 at 09:05 AM





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