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Mike Fowler
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p.1 #1 · Swan River sunrise - First Post


Ok so this isn't really my first post once again, but first time posting an image of mine up on to the forums and this is also my first attempt at a landscape shot . First posted this over in the photo critique section but it doesn't seem its too lively over there so id thought id dip my toes in over here (original post - https://www.fredmiranda.com/forum/topic/646974). Any comments and constructive criticism is appreciated as I'm new in the world of DSLR photography, taking in all the advice I can get!

Must admit im feeling very intimidated posting this photo amongst all these other wonderful images, just don't think I make the cut lol :P But I guess I've got to start somewhere,

Cheers

Mike
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Taken on the Swan River shore front in Perth at a ridiculous time in the morning I'm in no way used to, Canon 40D, Tamron 17-50mm f/2.8 - f/32, 2 second exposure at 19mm.




Edited on May 15, 2008 at 10:45 AM



May 15, 2008 at 10:45 AM
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p.1 #2 · Swan River sunrise - First Post


Lovely soft light scene, Mike. I like it a lot. The surface of the water is beautifully done.
There appears to be a clone tool artifact(?) at the water line, right-center that needs cleaning up.
I'd be tepmted to darken the sky and water, a little bit, leaving the lovely light on the trees.

Barry



May 15, 2008 at 11:45 AM
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p.1 #3 · Swan River sunrise - First Post


Lovely shot, Mike. I like your composition, here. Glad you posted and welcome to FM!!

Sharon



May 15, 2008 at 11:53 AM
Mike Fowler
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p.1 #4 · Swan River sunrise - First Post


Thanks guys

Barry - Thanks for your comments, the surface of the river when I arrived was breathtaking, I think it was enough for me to decide that I will drag myself out of bed before the sun rises more often hehe. Ill have a go at darkening the water and sky and ill post an update soon. Also the artifact that you mentioned I honestly really don't have a clue what has caused that lol, Ive only done minor cloning and just on the right side eliminating a large light source. The strange thing is it appears on almost all of my photos under the exact same tree Honestly have no clue what caused it.

Sharon - Thank you was struggling a bit to begin with trying to find a good composition being my first "proper" shoot, but hopefully I'll get used to it soon enough.

Edited on May 15, 2008 at 12:09 PM



May 15, 2008 at 12:06 PM





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