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Archive 2008 · #294: Nightly Dram

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p.1 #1 · #294: Nightly Dram

Nightly Dram - Cheers!

Edited on May 13, 2008 at 05:50 PM

May 13, 2008 at 05:49 PM

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p.1 #2 · #294: Nightly Dram

I like the splash effect although focus on the glass rather than specifically on the bottle would have worked better for me. Just my 2�. Nice. Good luck.--Frank

May 13, 2008 at 06:42 PM

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p.1 #3 · #294: Nightly Dram

Hi,

This is an interesting shot and a great idea. I agree with Frank that the splash effect is nice and the composition could be improved. A little more DOF would be nice and the gray sash or whatever in the background I find a bit distracting. I hope this feedback helps. Good luck this week.

Steve S.

May 13, 2008 at 07:37 PM

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p.1 #4 · #294: Nightly Dram

I thought it was an unusual piano in the background?

Nicely done, and good luck!

May 13, 2008 at 08:44 PM

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p.1 #5 · #294: Nightly Dram

Thanks for the feedback and tips. The background is actually an album cover - anyone fancy hazarding a guess at the record

Ian

May 14, 2008 at 03:17 AM

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p.1 #6 · #294: Nightly Dram

Steve Spencer wrote:
... the splash effect is nice and the composition could be improved. A little more DOF would be nice and the gray sash or whatever in the background I find a bit distracting.

Agreed.
Good luck!

May 14, 2008 at 05:29 PM


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