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BartvanderWorp
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p.1 #1 · Late night shopping


A recent photo on which I would like some feedback.

Late night shopping.




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Edited on May 12, 2008 at 10:54 PM


May 12, 2008 at 10:50 PM
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p.1 #2 · Late night shopping


I think it'd actually benefit from not having people in it. The lines are busy enough, which I like. It's composed well, but his left hand and her face are weird and distracting.

May 12, 2008 at 11:39 PM
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p.1 #3 · Late night shopping


For me it is too busy - lines going in all directions. The expressions seem random.

White balance seems to orange.

I think you need to go simple with this kind of shot - it is either about people with elavator as setting or the opposite.

In either case much simpler would do better.

May 13, 2008 at 04:08 AM
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p.1 #4 · Late night shopping


I like the lines and the people. It forces you to look at it and want to figure it out. The hands and expressions, however could have been better as noted.

With shots like this, I usually have the camera set for multiple shots and focus tracking, firing off a series. With people, in the street or even posed, you need a few to choose from because you might have caught them with their eyes closed, strange expression, etc.

May 15, 2008 at 04:50 AM

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