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pay attention to details. Your work is nice but you could increase quality.
1_this is good; would have been nice to see more of her dress.
2_windows are not elegant
3_bad harsh shadow in the back: you should try to work with bounced light( there is a lot of infos here about bounced light using flash on camera)
5_ very nice moment here, despite the shoulder on left part
8_ since the groom's face is the main subject, next time try to focus on his face. and having the surroundings out of focus, you'll get a more dramatic image.
also, when i say to pay attention to details, you should get rid of the red sign on background. maybe also the white spot.
these are little details, but sometimes makes the difference.
good luck
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