comments welcome!!!
Setup- flash, no flashes, used reflector to bounce the light to hit the two models.
PP- cropping none.
Noise Ninja
and healing spot to get rid of blemish on the legs or bruises.
May 09, 2008 at 05:19 AM
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i think the lighting is interesting but the bottom right corner spoils the mood-might help to crop it out, clone it out, etc.-the problem is see with this shot is in their posture/body language-it's obvious they're cramped, which results in a slightly hunched posture
daniel
May 09, 2008 at 05:29 AM
Steady Hand Offline Buy and Sell: On
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Awkward poses. Detracts from their beauty.
I hope this comment helps you.
May 09, 2008 at 12:59 PM
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I agree with SH, awkward poses. Also the angle that they are shot from, it bring attention to their feet, and they are enlarged from the angle.
May 09, 2008 at 01:05 PM
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i would crop above the knee area but keep both hands in the frame. Like the light and color. Think the long legs bending to fit add to the awkward position.
May 09, 2008 at 04:37 PM
grosema Offline Buy and Sell: On
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Dress them up in some furry cave woman outfits start a small fire and keep that face expression the one that sas, be afraid of man.
Just a thought
May 09, 2008 at 04:54 PM
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Clever use the the reflector... I think the overall look if the models, cramped and all, fit the context of the location, especially the model on the right who has very apprehensive cowering body language. The one one the left looks a bit too relaxed and bored.... It would be a much more powerful image if you were to clone out the model on the left...
May 09, 2008 at 05:19 PM
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The girl in the green her stomach (due to pose) leaves a not so nice looking crease.
May 09, 2008 at 07:42 PM
Orguss Offline Image Upload: Off
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Sweet! Thanks guys for some awesome advices and comments, appreciated them all. I will work on them next time.
May 10, 2008 at 12:59 AM
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facial expressions are very uncomfortable (i don't mean to hurt your feelings with this comment at all and if i do i am sorry) they look like they are constipated
thats the only problem i have with the picture other wise i particularly like the background and the lighting
May 10, 2008 at 02:05 AM
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No feelings has been hurt, it actually gives me idea when other comments, improving is what I'm looking for or why else even post at all
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