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p.1 #1 · Can't think of one off hand...


Just three of my mediocre attempts at something besides wildlife!

Comments, criticisms and helpful advice appreciated.

Frank

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g160/Strooth/Scenes/IMG_2283.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g160/Strooth/Scenes/CountrysideAtDusk-1.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g160/Strooth/Scenes/Hay_hay_hay.jpg



Mar 23, 2008 at 05:05 AM
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p.1 #2 · Can't think of one off hand...


I love road shots, Frank, so I appreciate 1 and 2 very much. The first is a great winter scene apart from that, um, Honda sitting there. Lovely light in the second.
peter



Mar 23, 2008 at 10:20 AM
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p.1 #3 · Can't think of one off hand...


I like both of the road shots. Like Pappy, sans car. The last one might benefit from a bottom crop, and more contrast.


Mar 23, 2008 at 02:38 PM
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p.1 #4 · Can't think of one off hand...


Thanks for the comments and compliments, guys!! I didn't think the car was detrimental to the image, personally. In fact, I made a point of including it. Criticism noted!

The last one was taken on a brutally hot, hazy day, and I was hoping to convey that in the photo to some extent. It is a fairly extensive crop, so I could chop off some of the bottom. But I think that's about the only part that's really in focus!! Due mainly to the haze, you understand....

BTW, Acura's aren't expensive Honda's. Honda's are cheap Acura's!!

Frank



Mar 23, 2008 at 07:51 PM
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p.1 #5 · Can't think of one off hand...


Hey Frank,

Landscapes are sure another animal huh?

#1 is a really cool photo, but if I were you, I would go have a talking to with the knucklehead who drove their overpriced Honda into your shot...

Remember when shooting Landscapes to focus on the "Land" part... While ancient old buildings and all can add to Landscape shots, often landscape shots with modern cars in them are only seen as ads in some cheap magazine...

#2 is pretty cool with the way the road is. I like that one. And #3 is sweet. I wouldn't crop it more, as you said, that's all that's in focus anyway... So it works as a nice lead in to the rest of the shot, and it helps to convey your thinking of a hot hazy day as the rest of the image leads off into the distance.

You have some great creativity here. I think you should ummm spread your wings a bit and start interspersing more LANDscape shots with your wildlife shots...

Jim



Mar 23, 2008 at 08:49 PM
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p.1 #6 · Can't think of one off hand...


Thanks, Jim!! I'll have a word with the bone-head about leaving his p.o.s. import right where I'm trying to take a photograph, just as soon as I find him.

Point taken and appreciated re the "Land" part of landscape. Trouble is, the "Land" scapes around here aren't exactly inspiring. But I guess it's up to the photographer to make it interesting, isn't it?! Selective use of wide angle and telephoto lenses can make the familiar and mundane look less so.

Your encouragement is also welcomed! I more or less drifted into wildlife photography, simply because it was there. And I don't have to think about it too much (even though I know I should!). I just shoot whatever I find, wherever I find it. Pretty lazy, huh?! Now that I've copped a 17-40 though, I hope to grab some cool shots once the greyness of winter has bid it's final farewell...'til ~next November, anyway.

Cheers!

Frank



Mar 23, 2008 at 09:37 PM
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p.1 #7 · Can't think of one off hand...


Really good set, Frank! Love the road shots(yeah, the first would be nicer w/o the car), and the hazy soft light in the last is excellent!

Barry



Mar 26, 2008 at 03:57 PM
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p.1 #8 · Can't think of one off hand...


#1: good, but better without the car
#2: great, but you should straighten it; beautiful light and well thought composition
#3: simply beautiful, though you might try to crop a bit off the bottom



Mar 26, 2008 at 05:09 PM
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p.1 #9 · Can't think of one off hand...


2 would have been an awesome HDR shot to put some color back into the sky. 3 looks a bit soft but the concept is good.


Mar 26, 2008 at 10:52 PM
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p.1 #10 · Can't think of one off hand...


Frank, last shot is the best IMHO. It has a main foreground subject, no modern days distractions (cars,road signs) and that lovely golden colour.

Edited on Mar 27, 2008 at 11:40 AM



Mar 27, 2008 at 11:40 AM
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p.1 #11 · Can't think of one off hand...


#2 ---I would crop the OOF road in the foreground, and the telephone poles on the side, and the sky, then you've got a real winner IMHO. The intersecting line made by the street just below center makes for interesting play against the compressed road of the fore to back ground.

#3 --- I would remove the sky and negative space in the FG. Focus on the shapes of the bails and force the viewer to discuss them..... Another winner!!!!

Best,
Justin



Mar 27, 2008 at 04:42 PM
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p.1 #12 · Can't think of one off hand...


I like the third and agree on removing the sky. I think the golden fields and bales make for a lovely shot.

Sharon



Mar 27, 2008 at 05:32 PM





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