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Archive 2008 · Submission for MA

  
 
Kevin Sherman
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p.1 #1 · Submission for MA


Hey all, stuck between three images for this months assignment, Technology. What are your thoughts?

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2:


3:


Edited on Mar 16, 2008 at 10:09 PM



Mar 16, 2008 at 10:08 PM
Scott Stoness
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p.1 #2 · Submission for MA


3, 1, 2 for me.

For me 2 is less about technology (barb wire is pretty old).

I like the lines in 3. However I am an electrical engineer who spent 25 years in the electric industry so I am biased.



Mar 16, 2008 at 11:01 PM
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p.1 #3 · Submission for MA


yeah, I am mostly between 1 and 3. I do really like 2, but I can see what you mean about it not conveying technology as much. I think I have a slight leaning towards 1.

Thanks for the input Scott!



Mar 16, 2008 at 11:13 PM
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p.1 #4 · Submission for MA


1, 2, 3 for me

1 seems to send to clearest message, and i really like the variety of shapes exhibited, for some reason, those radiating circles are pleasing to my eye =]

2 is nice, but the composition is a bit off IMHO - i feel like the diagonal lines be more diagonal and end on opposite corners (if that makes sense) - just feels a bit unbalenced

3 too visually confusing for me - i still like #1 the best =]



Apr 02, 2008 at 05:30 AM





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