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Comments always welcome!

Edited on Mar 20, 2011 at 12:17 PM · View previous versions

Mar 19, 2011 at 09:01 PM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · #441 Love of the bottle

Good subject and composition but I am afraid I am not too keen on the post-processing (it is a bit too strong).

Mar 20, 2011 at 03:44 AM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · #441 Love of the bottle

I tend to agree, a touch too grainy. Steve

Mar 20, 2011 at 07:10 AM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · #441 Love of the bottle

Still its a very interesting and shot.

Norm

Mar 20, 2011 at 08:57 AM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · #441 Love of the bottle

The subject choice is superb but the composition (almost dead-center, chopped off legs) can be improved IMHO.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.

Mar 21, 2011 at 06:33 AM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · #441 Love of the bottle

I like it. The mood and story come though loud and clear in this image. I agree with the others about a couple of technical nits, but nonetheless it works for me. Good job.

Mar 22, 2011 at 07:18 AM

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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · #441 Love of the bottle

Nice idea. Too much dark space to the right. Subject probably right in the centre and probably recomposing from a bit lower including the legs would make it even better.

Mar 24, 2011 at 08:52 PM

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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · #441 Love of the bottle

niani,
Thanks for comment. A little about the shot and some of the constraints I faced. I took the shot at night, camera was on tripod, it was a self portrait. I had a difficult time trying to see to focus to focus and position myself in the shot. I feel suggestions are good, I just was having a tough time executing the shot.
Thanks to all who commented.
Larry

Mar 25, 2011 at 06:03 AM


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