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in Boston
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Jan 07, 2011 at 06:22 PM
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Sweet shot Scott. Great composition and conversion!

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Jan 07, 2011 at 08:27 PM
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Very nice shot. A few thoughts: (1) consider applying a tiny bit of perspective distortion and barrel distortion correction, (2) the truncated "ONE" is a tad distracting -- not entirely sure what to do about that. Overall, though, a beautiful shot: very interesting structure. Thanks for sharing.

Kevin
Jan 07, 2011 at 09:18 PM
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Lovely mix of windows. I like it (and the composition). Not too keen about the frame though. Too big IMHO.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.


Jan 08, 2011 at 02:01 PM
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Very cool shot!
Jan 08, 2011 at 05:02 PM
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Nice Presentation on this one. Well done.
Jan 08, 2011 at 11:01 PM
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gregfountain wrote:
Sweet shot Scott. Great composition and conversion!

Greg

Thanks Greg!
Scott
Jan 09, 2011 at 07:17 AM
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kevinsullivan wrote:
Very nice shot. A few thoughts: (1) consider applying a tiny bit of perspective distortion and barrel distortion correction, (2) the truncated "ONE" is a tad distracting -- not entirely sure what to do about that. Overall, though, a beautiful shot: very interesting structure. Thanks for sharing.

Kevin

Kevin,
I appreciate your helpful comments. I actually did quite a bit of work on the distortion in CS4, but there is more to learn. And I agree about the ONE.
Scott
Jan 09, 2011 at 07:18 AM
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Yakim Peled wrote:
Lovely mix of windows. I like it (and the composition). Not too keen about the frame though. Too big IMHO.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.

Took your suggestion, Yakim. Changed from white matte to a more classic matted and framed presentation. Thanks.
Scott
Jan 09, 2011 at 07:19 AM
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Hockeytown, Mark:
Thanks!
Scott
Jan 09, 2011 at 07:19 AM
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Well, Scott, I really like this. The issues that Kevin mentions didn't jump out until I read his post (and unfortunately now they do). One way to fix the the missing "O" might be to darken the levels in the area of that sign so that it starts to blend into the background a bit.

The composition works really well, with the strong diagonal coming in from the bottom left. Interesting lines all around. I could do without the frame, though.

Cheers,
Rich
Jan 09, 2011 at 03:09 PM
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Now I see were all my money goes, lol nice shot

Norm
Jan 09, 2011 at 07:53 PM
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Scott,
I have looked at this shot several different times just to see how I reacted to it each time and its wonderful with all the shapes and lines. My only nit is that I my eye always goes to the "financial center" in the bottom corner. Have you thought about cropping out the right side of the image where the sign is. It would make it square in format but might add a lot to the image.


Jan 10, 2011 at 09:00 AM
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Nice lines, nice framing.


Jan 10, 2011 at 10:46 AM
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Aren't financial institutions grand - now you know where much of the money goes. We have several similar structures in my home town.

More importantly I like the abstract feel of this shot and the composition as well.


Jan 10, 2011 at 11:02 PM





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