Well, I'm not sure that I'm happy with the quality of the result compared to the original vision in my mind. But I tried out a lot of ideas that were new to me and shot by candlelight for the first time, and I spent a long time trying to get a decent shot out of the experience... so I guess I should post what I came up with.
I like what you've done - moody, good placement of objects. Your visualization drove the process as one can see this was carefully planned through. Well done.