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http://tesselator.gpmod.com/Images/_Land_n_City_scapes/PICT6568_Relaxation_Garden.jpg
1 - Relaxation Party


http://tesselator.gpmod.com/Images/_Land_n_City_scapes/PICT6613_Bamboo_Sun.jpg
2 - The Bamboo Sun


http://tesselator.gpmod.com/Images/_Land_n_City_scapes/PICT6668_Bridge_To_Color_Original.jpg
3 - A Bridge To Color (Changed to original - see below)


http://tesselator.gpmod.com/Images/_Land_n_City_scapes/PICT6677_Fall_Maple.jpg
4 - Maple Fall




Crits and comments always welcome!

(EDIT: If you're using the latest version of Firefox everything may have a slight yellow cast.)





Also See:
  1. Autumn In Japan I (This thread)
  2. Autumn In Japan II
  3. Autumn In Japan III
  4. Autumn In Japan IV
  5. Autumn In Japan V
  6. Autumn In Japan VI


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Dec 02, 2009 at 06:29 AM
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p.1 #2 · Autumn in Japan I


Beautiful set of images. I particularly like the third one, though slightly less sharpening would probably be better for web display. In any event, thanks for sharing the season.

hugh



Dec 02, 2009 at 08:05 AM
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p.1 #3 · Autumn in Japan I


Lovely set here. I agree with Hugh in that the 3rd can stand to have a tad less sharpening but by far it
is my favourite of the lot. I tend to tone done the amount of USM applied to these type of heavy vegetation shots as they do not need as much sharpening.

Thanks,
Al B



Dec 02, 2009 at 08:22 AM
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p.1 #4 · Autumn in Japan I


Thanks guys.

Here's kind of a funky mod. I dunno if it really expresses the mental image I was going for but whatever...
Oh, and there's no sharpening in this one other than the 12%, radius 1.0 applied via ACR when I brought it in - it still looks noisy to me though <shrug>.

http://tesselator.gpmod.com/Images/_Land_n_City_scapes/PICT6668Briged_to_Color_Mod.jpg
5 - A Bridge To Color (Mod)





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Dec 02, 2009 at 09:05 AM
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p.1 #5 · Autumn in Japan I


The server is back up. Sorry about that.


Dec 02, 2009 at 05:01 PM
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p.1 #6 · Autumn in Japan I


I love the fourth. Those red leaves are gorgeous. I also like the composition of your third/fifth but I don't like your processing on either version. It is just too harsh for my taste.

Sharon



Dec 02, 2009 at 05:59 PM
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p.1 #7 · Autumn in Japan I


Thanks!

Yeah, My previous similar set turned out harsh like this too. I think I'm trying to compensate for a sensor with such low dynamics. I have some more from this shoot that I'm going to try and avoid this with. Wish me luck.





Dec 02, 2009 at 10:08 PM
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p.1 #8 · Autumn in Japan I


Looks great! I like the compositions. I suppose this is what really separates men with cameras from boys with toys...
Is it from your walkabout with Mung?



Dec 02, 2009 at 10:54 PM
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p.1 #9 · Autumn in Japan I


"Boys with toys"... Ouch!

Oh well, the truth hurts sometimes I guess.

Muan? No, that was a separate deal. This is Shiratori Teien with the GF. It was fun... playing with my toy.


BTW, everyone can tell these are tone mappings from multiple images right? I didn't need to say so did I? #3 is mapped from 5 images.

It goes

1 is 5 exposures.
2 is 4 exposures
3 is 5 exposures
4 is a single exposure
5 is from the same 5 exposure tiff as number 3 is.

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Dec 03, 2009 at 07:18 AM
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p.1 #10 · Autumn in Japan I


nice scenes!

the processing im guessing is either HDR or Exposure Blending
and this I fear is leaving the corners with a horrible degree of
ca or fringing [red/blue] outline, it really detracts from the image.

cannot beiieve nobody has commented or seen this.



Dec 03, 2009 at 07:33 AM
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p.1 #11 · Autumn in Japan I


Yup. Looks Like I was editing my message when you posted this.

And yes the CA is really pronounced at 5 times over sampled (compound error). But I thought one would have to zoom up on it to really have it be much of a bother. You notice it right off huh? Bummer.






Dec 03, 2009 at 07:39 AM
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p.1 #12 · Autumn in Japan I


sorry bill,

yea we were both posting there at the same time!

I find that blending images with a slight bit
of CA present just gets amplified in the process.




Dec 03, 2009 at 07:54 AM
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p.1 #13 · Autumn in Japan I


Yeah, agreed.

So from all the crits on number 3 I decided to turn off everything and just do a straight blend (tone mapping) without using any of the bell and whistle features or trying to "fix" or "enhance" anything at all in PS or ACR. So this is just the straight blend. It looks very much like what my eyes actually saw that day as well.

http://tesselator.gpmod.com/Images/_Land_n_City_scapes/PICT6668_Bridge_To_Color_Original.jpg
6 - A Bridge To Color (unmodified "original" blend)


Is this better or worse or ??



Dec 03, 2009 at 09:19 AM
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p.1 #14 · Autumn in Japan I


Much better IMHO. The earlier images definetly felt overprocessed to me, but that may just be my taste. Lovely composition. I might be tempted to crop a bit of the sky off the top and perhaps desaturate the red channel a bit, but I think your last version is the way to go. - Paul


Dec 03, 2009 at 09:44 AM
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p.1 #15 · Autumn in Japan I


pinball_pw wrote:
Much better IMHO. The earlier images definetly felt overprocessed to me, but that may just be my taste. Lovely composition. I might be tempted to crop a bit of the sky off the top and perhaps desaturate the red channel a bit, but I think your last version is the way to go. - Paul


+1

the CA is still visible to me but obviously not as much,

if you corrected it in PS it would sharpen up everything too!

sorry to go on about it . .



Dec 03, 2009 at 10:25 AM
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p.1 #16 · Autumn in Japan I


The first and last are my picks.

Morris



Dec 03, 2009 at 05:33 PM
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p.1 #17 · Autumn in Japan I


Thanks guys!




Dec 04, 2009 at 01:19 AM
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p.1 #18 · Autumn in Japan I


Hi there...The third photo is outstanding. I like the contrast and colors of this shot.

Justin



Dec 04, 2009 at 01:34 AM
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p.1 #19 · Autumn in Japan I


Hi Justin,

Thanks for the comment



Dec 22, 2009 at 08:54 PM
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p.1 #20 · Autumn in Japan I


Your last photo above, with the new processing, is definitely the best. The processing on the other photos really bothers me. There are problems with halos, CA, and imperfect alignment (possibly the leaves were moving between exposures). Still there are some halo problems, but it is a very nice shot anyway. Where is this located?


Dec 22, 2009 at 09:16 PM
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