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p.1 #1 · Off The Grid

An older pic just collecting dust in a folder, forgive me if I posted it already - although it would have been about a year ago....

Any and all critique/suggestions welcome.

http://www.pbase.com/dajavu/image/105031235/original.jpg
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Nov 15, 2009 at 01:01 AM

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p.1 #2 · Off The Grid

Looks like the Beverly Hillbillies homestead pre-oil period!
I like your shot.
-Tim

Nov 15, 2009 at 11:46 AM

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p.1 #3 · Off The Grid

They must've all been out hunting rabbits/looking for oil, for no one was home - not even Granny - and the door padlocked. Thanks Tim!

David

Nov 15, 2009 at 12:30 PM

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p.1 #4 · Off The Grid

love the welcome mats.
regards, tom

Nov 15, 2009 at 01:22 PM

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p.1 #5 · Off The Grid

Lovely. I know you are pushing the blacks hard, but I would love to see a hair more detail along the right hand side.

Best!
Daniel

Nov 15, 2009 at 03:10 PM

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p.1 #6 · Off The Grid

Much thanks Tom and Daniel!

Daniel, looking at it more I agree that I put too much into the vignette on that side, thanks again.

David

Nov 16, 2009 at 12:29 PM


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