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p.1 #1 · Treman State Park + Revision


After leaving the New England area this fall, we ventured to the Finger Lakes area of NY.

Treman State Park is situated on the outskirts of Ithaca. It offers numerous waterfalls in beautiful surroundings. This particular scene is adjacent to the site of an old gristmill, as the water was used for its main source of power.

Hope you enjoy.

http://tekedsolutions.com/photos/ny/treman_01.jpg

Revision (Less Sharpening). Any better?
http://tekedsolutions.com/photos/ny/treman_02.jpg



Cheers,
Ed



Edited on Nov 05, 2009 at 06:12 AM · View previous versions



Nov 04, 2009 at 07:37 PM
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p.1 #2 · Treman State Park + Revision


very nice ed, i didn't make it to here this time. it has a painterly look probably because the leaves are sharp!


Nov 04, 2009 at 10:33 PM
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p.1 #3 · Treman State Park + Revision


Ed

Beautiful image really like the multiple Falls and the zig zag you have captured here. Very nice choice of shutter speed as you have some very nice detail in the flowing water, nice work here Ed.

Ray Still



Nov 04, 2009 at 10:47 PM
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p.1 #4 · Treman State Park + Revision


Your treatment of the water is fabulous, the leaves a great detail and the greenery finish off an excellent piece of work.

Rich



Nov 04, 2009 at 11:06 PM
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p.1 #5 · Treman State Park + Revision


A very well composed shot Ed, and as said, has great flow and is nicely exposed for the best motion. I'm sure printed this would a super shot, here it's a tad over sharpened, imho.


Nov 04, 2009 at 11:26 PM
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p.1 #6 · Treman State Park + Revision


Great scene and comp and it looks like a nice exposure but the sharpening is pretty far over the top as I see this on my monitor.

Alan



Nov 04, 2009 at 11:57 PM
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p.1 #7 · Treman State Park + Revision


I must agree, it is seems very much oversharpened to a point where you lose the richness of the colours. The scene is great, must a bit less would be more here.
Ute



Nov 05, 2009 at 01:54 AM
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p.1 #8 · Treman State Park + Revision


Beautiful comp Ed. The water looks great but I have to agree on the over sharpening.

Mike



Nov 05, 2009 at 05:38 AM
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p.1 #9 · Treman State Park + Revision


I have posted a revision that I hope corrected the over sharpening problem. I edited that using my laptop. And, I thought that it might be kind of iffy.

Please let me know if it looks better.

Thanks for all the help on this.

Cheers,
Ed



Nov 05, 2009 at 05:54 AM
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p.1 #10 · Treman State Park + Revision


Hello Ed, a nice, contained scene. A suggestion on sharpening - view at 200%, click Preview off and on as you increase sharpening in small steps, when you just begin to see a difference the image is sharpened enough for the web.

hugh



Nov 05, 2009 at 06:02 AM
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p.1 #11 · Treman State Park + Revision


YES!
Much better Ed!



Nov 05, 2009 at 11:23 AM
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p.1 #12 · Treman State Park + Revision


Yes, much nicer. Lovely scene!

Barry



Nov 06, 2009 at 09:17 AM
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p.1 #13 · Treman State Park + Revision


The water looks like fluid lead, it suits well to the intense green.
Karl



Nov 06, 2009 at 03:19 PM





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