I agree with Silvawispa. I hate the plastic skin of an overly smoothed PP job, but there is too much detail of the pores. Did you sharpen the image without masking the skin?
If your objective was to show pores, you succeeded. It's a little odd for an attractive young woman to have such prominent pores after proper foundation make up has been applied, but there it is.
The first looks like she has sandpaper for skin which isn't very flattering to the model. You might want to use that half moon brush on the eyes in a more subtle way as well. Maybe put it on its own layer and put some gauss blur and lower opacity.
Magnify the image in PS to pore level and dodge and burn to even out the skin. This will get you a much better even looking skin.
