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p.1 #1 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


A previous post by Pilles on Mona Lisa inspired me ...

Let's go .. if you have some time to write and if the image works for you ..

http://www.virtualgallery.be/temp/monalisa.jpg

model : Lamia



Aug 07, 2009 at 11:55 AM
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p.1 #2 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


Makes me think of an old Master, Rembrandt perhaps. Looks like it should be oil on canvas.

She knows something we dont, and she is ammused by it.

I rather like it.



Aug 07, 2009 at 12:52 PM
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p.1 #3 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


Lucretia (Borgia)
__________

She seduces with her eyes...

But beware!

Each drop of hers you drink,

will bring you closer to the brink,

of eternal darkness.

You are ensnared!



Aug 07, 2009 at 12:53 PM
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p.1 #4 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


Great idea, but I cannot see any separation between Lamia and the background/jacket; all the blacks blend together.

I think that, if this was the intent, then earth toned objects behind her are a distraction. If however this is intended to be more painterly than the background or her hair & jacket need some more detail and a shade lighter than the other.

If you are looking for a Rembrandt style then you need more earth tones (and a harder focus)... most painters included a lush and detailed background or at minimum s textured backdrop to give the subject context...

Ian



Aug 07, 2009 at 06:23 PM
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p.1 #5 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


I keep going back to look again, trying to understand why the captivation. I keep looking at the softness, even out of focus-ness, of the lips and eyes compared to the sharpness of the glass and her ring,... yet the eyes have/give the impression of a sharp, piercing intensity.

Plus what Steadman said.




Aug 07, 2009 at 07:40 PM
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p.1 #6 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


I think it's a brilliant interpretation. BRAVO! I am totally captivated in many ways, certainly not just the model's expression.

There are some things that taken purely on a technical basis are not quite perfect, but that was also the idea. The chiaroscuro is outstanding IMHO.

See my comments about group think in the referenced thread.

Bravo! This is an image I could look at over and over. Absolutely stunning.



Aug 07, 2009 at 09:32 PM
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p.1 #7 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


Geo31 wrote:
I think it's a brilliant interpretation. BRAVO! I am totally captivated in many ways, certainly not just the model's expression.

There are some things that taken purely on a technical basis are not quite perfect, but that was also the idea. The chiaroscuro is outstanding IMHO.


"chiaroscuro!!" Wow!

See my comments about group think in the referenced thread.

Bravo! This is an image I could look at over and over. Absolutely stunning.




Aug 07, 2009 at 11:25 PM
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p.1 #8 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


I like it but maybe a tad more light in the eyes. Missing the catch lights bothers me a bit!

Evan



Aug 07, 2009 at 11:36 PM
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p.1 #9 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


thanks to you all ... the fact that some of yours are coming back on the image or are captivated is more that encouraging ..

I posted a ... part II on the same concept, but technically different



Aug 08, 2009 at 03:25 AM
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p.1 #10 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


I referenced this photo in another thread so I just thought I'd bump this sublime image to the top again.

I am completely captivated by this image as is a lady friend who is my muse. We both find this image stunning and compelling, even (perhaps especially) the more time goes on.

Once again, bravo. This is brilliant IMHO.

Thread where I've referenced this:

https://www.fredmiranda.com/forum/topic/858709/0#lastmessage



Jan 22, 2010 at 07:20 AM
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p.1 #11 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


Geo31 wrote:
I referenced this photo in another thread so I just thought I'd bump this sublime image to the top again.

I am completely captivated by this image as is a lady friend who is my muse. We both find this image stunning and compelling, even (perhaps especially) the more time goes on.

Once again, bravo. This is brilliant IMHO.

Thread where I've referenced this:

https://www.fredmiranda.com/forum/topic/858709/0#lastmessage



I saw that reference in the other thread and could not remember which photo was the subject.

This is good to see again.




Jan 22, 2010 at 09:33 AM
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p.1 #12 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


I like everything about the portrait with the exception of the deliberate softness. It's too far, in my view. Enjoy all other aspects.

John-



Jan 22, 2010 at 09:34 AM
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p.1 #13 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


I wouldn't change a thing about it. Great shot.

Peace,

Todd



Jan 22, 2010 at 11:55 AM
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p.1 #14 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


It is very stunning and compelling. It would look great up-sized and on a living room or den wall! Very dramatic and almost hypnotizing. Excellent work.

Steve



Jan 23, 2010 at 01:10 AM
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p.1 #15 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


It's quite a surprise to see a picture I had almost forgot back on the forum again

Anyway, thank you to you all for those comments.



Jan 23, 2010 at 02:29 AM
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p.1 #16 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


I wanted to wait and see this on another system, before I commented.

The blacks are totally filled in. Well, it showed that on 2 different boxes...

Why? No seperation at all, from what I can see.

Not saying it HAS to have some, but things are just floating around. Kind of.



Jan 23, 2010 at 08:35 AM
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p.1 #17 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


Pandacat wrote:
I keep going back to look again, trying to understand why the captivation. I keep looking at the softness, even out of focus-ness, of the lips and eyes compared to the sharpness of the glass and her ring,... yet the eyes have/give the impression of a sharp, piercing intensity.


Yes, I think her face being slightly soft, vs the glass, is part of the magic. Very interesting way to break the rules.

I also think that, perhaps, the slightly yellow skin tone of her face adds to the "old oil painting" look, even though it is also technically incorrect.



Jan 23, 2010 at 09:04 AM
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p.1 #18 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


Beautiful. Captivating. Stimulating. Magnificent image. Oh, did I mention I like it?


Jan 23, 2010 at 09:24 AM
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p.1 #19 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


It appears that the sharpest part of the image is the glass or ring on her finger. I then thought she was modeling jewelry. This was a distraction for me from the beautiful image. If it were my image I would soften the glass and ring.


Jan 23, 2010 at 01:18 PM
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p.1 #20 · my view on Mona Lisa (impressions)


Cableaddict wrote:
Yes, I think her face being slightly soft, vs the glass, is part of the magic. Very interesting way to break the rules.

I also think that, perhaps, the slightly yellow skin tone of her face adds to the "old oil painting" look, even though it is also technically incorrect.


Yes!! Exactly!

There are threads floating around here about breaking the rules and being creative and teaching, etc., etc., etc. This image breaks a few rules, yet I find it far and away the most compelling and beautiful image I personally have seen on this forum in the time I've been here. It may be the most beautiful "people" photo I've personally seen in the 33 years I've been a photographer and I came close to doing this for a living.




Jan 23, 2010 at 04:31 PM
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