Matt reminded me of a young Lou Ferrigno. I tried to accentuate his body and musculature and use the college campus to accentuate his youth and vibrancy. He has a large scar on the left side of his face, which he asked me to remove for some of the pics, so he can see the difference. He's thinking about having it removed via plastic surgery.
Comments welcome.
First I have to say you did great on removing the scar. About the muscle showing ... not that much. Musculature is best shot with controlled lighting, where you can choose the direction of it to accentuate the shadows around the muscle. That would make your muscle pop. In your case, I think the lighting conditions were going against what you wanted to show in the images. Shooting mid day could still give you some great results if you find the right poses and angle.