fredmiranda.com
Login

Moderated by: Fred Miranda
  New fredmiranda.com Mobile Site
  New Feature: SMS Notification alert
  New Feature: Buy & Sell Watchlist
  

FM Forums | Photo Critique | Join Upload & Sell

  

Archive 2009 · the Reader cross post

  
 
digitalbug30d
Offline
• • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #1 · the Reader cross post


http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3333/3656672244_b0e6908927_b.jpg

hows this


Edited on Jun 24, 2009 at 08:21 PM · View previous versions



Jun 24, 2009 at 02:34 AM
sbeme
Offline
• • • • • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #2 · the Reader cross post


Nice shot and good subject for BW. Like this composition with the interesting arcs and lines, interesting shadows.
Takes me back to college. Except that he looks old enough to be teaching. I can relate.
DOF is well-chosen.
I'd crop off the extreme top edge, removing the object top left and either cropping out or toning down the specular highlight upper right.
Scott



Jun 24, 2009 at 05:07 AM
AuntiPode
Offline
• • • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #3 · the Reader cross post


This image would be improved by cropping to place more emphasis on the subject.


Jun 24, 2009 at 06:09 PM





FM Forums | Photo Critique | Join Upload & Sell

    
 

Welcome back
Log in to your account