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These are some images that i took... Some editing of course but just wondering what you think? http://lh3.ggpht.com/_BCvNk3P3gy4/Sd0XxfbcPnI/AAAAAAAAEyo/Rl8Vf1jRYAc/s640/DSC05955_edit.jpg

http://lh3.ggpht.com/_BCvNk3P3gy4/Sd0XxEXJ1_I/AAAAAAAAEyg/UTjLA7CYs1M/s640/DSC00648.JPG



Apr 08, 2009 at 04:33 PM
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p.1 #2 · Scenery


Nathan, I really like the #1, beautiful colours and layout
cheers Andrew



Apr 08, 2009 at 04:34 PM
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p.1 #3 · Scenery


Thanks! Do you think that it is too much editing?


Apr 08, 2009 at 06:34 PM
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The post is a bit small ( i suggest 800 on longest side for best comments).

1 has great colors. I think I might crop 1/2 of water off below to improve composition. To improve the composition I think you need an anchor on the right because the picture kind of feels truncated on the right.

2 is a better composition but needs a bird or something big top left to make it work better and untilting the horizon. There is a dot which is likely a bird that is too small middle. I would clone it out.

With the size you provided, the editing does not look too strong. Scott



Apr 08, 2009 at 10:19 PM
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p.1 #5 · Scenery


Thank you... Yeah i see your point on cropping the first one. And that i should have taken a bird or something in that picture.


Apr 09, 2009 at 05:06 AM





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