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Jan 12, 2009 at 01:19 AM
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Hi Crystal,

The is a gorgeous shot. I love both the idea and the execution. The intimacy in the shot is very compelling.

Cheers,

Steve S.



Jan 12, 2009 at 07:43 AM
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Thank you, Steve.

Crystal is the town I live in though (My fault for not signing my post, I was trying to avoid unnecessary dialog in the post. I went a little too far.)

-Josh



Jan 12, 2009 at 08:14 AM
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This is incredibly beautiful. Wonderful photo, I would not change a thing.

Carolyn



Jan 12, 2009 at 08:45 AM
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Lovely shot. And to think I just shot a similar subject but not with such intimacy….

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



Jan 12, 2009 at 09:13 AM
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Carolyn1250 wrote:
This is incredibly beautiful. Wonderful photo, I would not change a thing.

Carolyn


Thanks, Carolyn!

Yakim Peled wrote:
Lovely shot. And to think I just shot a similar subject but not with such intimacy….

Happy shooting,
Yakim.


Thank you, Yakim.

And to think, I almost didn't get this shot because the father's beliefs restrict him from having his picture taken. Good thing that just hands and arms don't count in that restriction



Jan 12, 2009 at 09:37 AM
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The father is a very good hand model!

Good luck,

John



Jan 12, 2009 at 10:26 AM
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Wow, beautiful image and contrast! Very creative! -Jamie


Jan 12, 2009 at 05:26 PM
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I agree.Great shot.This picture says a lot on a number of levels.
-Jim



Jan 12, 2009 at 08:44 PM
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Beautiful it is. I tend not to understand such restrictions (though like everyone else I deal with various constraints constantly), but to each his own. I'm glad that you had this opportunity and could be so creative with it.


Jan 12, 2009 at 11:56 PM
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Great shot, I will definitely be putting this to use sometime. I love all the different personalities you find in photography. I like this one alot.

Rob



Jan 12, 2009 at 11:57 PM
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Thanks for all of the nice comments.
The couple were also a bit nervous about the pictures (both the taking, until they warmed up, and the possible portfolio use, until I said that I wouldn't use anything without their permission, of course), but with all of this praise, I'm sure they will feel much more comfortable.
As always, even if you love it, let me know any critiques that could help me improve in the future.



Jan 13, 2009 at 08:21 AM
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Very nice take, I like how th black hands form an heart.
Maybe the treatment could be improved a bit (BW conversion -> whiter whites...).
Did you try a shot right in front, dead center ? Had this idea because of the symetrical subjects. Makes me think of a landscape shot from the sky...

Julien



Jan 13, 2009 at 06:05 PM
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I love the contrast of skin tones, and the framing is great. The woman's hands are gorgeous...well done!


Jan 13, 2009 at 10:49 PM
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Thanks James!

Julien - thanks for the suggestions. I did try a dead center shot, but I liked how her stomach looks in this angled shot. The dead on seemed too flat and I couldn't make the whole thing pop as much. I might play around with it a bit for the BW conversion, I basically just messed with some settings until I started to see the contrast and overall look I wanted, so I could definitely spend a bit more time working on it, just to see where it takes me. I'm new to photography and certainly post-processing, so a lot of it is pure trial and error right now.

Thanks again folks, keep your suggestions flowing!

-Josh



Jan 13, 2009 at 11:00 PM





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