You've captured some very nice expressions! I know how hard it can be to capture such a little one! One suggestion...be careful with the vignetting, especially on #3 (boy's sleeve) and #4 (lady's arm).
5 has a very nice compisition, however i feel that the lady is neither out-of-focus enough to be in the background and nor in-focus enough to be a subject, and so the overall feel is not quite what it should be
Y_vdm wrote:
#3. To much PP. Ok his eyes are blue, but here it's like saying very loud to the looker "do you see that his eyes are blue, hum .. do you ?".
I agree. I am not a fan of the 'bump up the eyes only' technique. I increased the overall vibrance to give his skin some more 'pop,' but evidently there wasn't much color there. The only part of the photo that really got pumped up were the eyes.
I see them as, well, what they are, photographs of your family. Doesn't look like you were trying to do anything artistic or out of the ordinary. Just taking a few family photos. You pointed the camera, got the exposure right and pressed the shutter button.
I can't really figure out what type of comments you are looking for
Is the PP intentional on 1? Their skin is very grayish almost as though you desaturated or overlaid it with a semi-transparent BW. The result isn't very pleasing. Same could be said of 4 to a lesser degree.
