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p.1 #1 · last trip thru asia


was in Singapore, China and Alamty, Kz. My layovers are usually short so I must accept the weather as it is. It rained most everywhere! Anyway any C7C is welcome...robert


Dec 26, 2008 at 06:28 PM
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p.1 #2 · last trip thru asia


Hi, Robert... thanks for sharing!

#2 the lanterns are gorgeous, nice composition and great colors.

All B/W are great, crisp and clear, again well composed. What software do you use to change color to B/W?

I like both bird pics - the first one has nice perspective, depth and a dreamy effect and what a great pattern in the second image... lovely

Best, Bee




Dec 27, 2008 at 07:53 PM
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p.1 #3 · last trip thru asia


Thank you for your nice comments Bee. I shot about 500 pics on this 14 day trip and wanted to share a few. I just used Picasa to go B&W and really didn't do much editing. I welcome all C&C thanks, robert


Dec 27, 2008 at 08:06 PM
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p.1 #4 · last trip thru asia


Hi Robert,
I know this is a small sampling, but you will often get more comments if you link together 2-3 related images for C and C. You can always start a new post the following day.
Here's my take:
1. A bit flat. Through a window? Doesnt do much for me.
2. Interesting subject. Nice colors, shapes. You could crop or clone out the sliver of a lamp far left.
3. Nice crisp, contraty BW. Wish you had a tad more on the bottom: you cut off some toes.
4. Nice angles. Good in BW. Like the compositon.
5. Another nice composition. I wish I could see this scene from a bit lower down or off to a side, but you only get some opportunities.
6. Interesting birds. A bit of distracting haze and reflections, esp by the upper bird.
7. Interesting scene. A challenge to find an ideal crop, since you have to chop some birds. Upper right corner bothers me and I'd crop that out.
Scott



Dec 27, 2008 at 08:38 PM
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p.1 #5 · last trip thru asia


Thanks Scott. Actually the first shot was from under a gazebo because of the down pour and even though I wish I could have eliminatd the rain falling off the roof the haze is nothing but a downpour with the lady standing under the umbrella. The snow scene was from a bridge and early evening as the light was going quickly. Thanks again, robert


Dec 27, 2008 at 08:54 PM
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p.1 #6 · last trip thru asia


Oops.
My numbering is off.
I skipped three, so add on to the number of my comments, starting with changing 3 to 4.
Great colors, great scene in 3.



Dec 27, 2008 at 08:56 PM
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p.1 #7 · last trip thru asia


Scott, even though I keep thinking there's something in #1 with the lone woman in the rain even my wife said it left her flat. Maybe I should just forget it!!
regards, robert



Dec 27, 2008 at 10:23 PM
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p.1 #8 · last trip thru asia


That's what I was looking for but never went beyond Picasa. I need to replace my ver. of Elements or move on to something else. When I was standing under that shelter that woman just stopped when the downpour came and she looked so isolated and alone almost an Eleanor Ridgy moment that I knew something could be done to portray that feeling. Also for this whole trip I was equipped with only my 17-85 f4.5 IS since my new 55-250IS was delivered home after I left, boy could I have used it.


Dec 28, 2008 at 08:44 AM
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p.1 #9 · last trip thru asia


Of course the $650/800 lb gorilla of processing is Photoshop, now up to CS4. I have CS and use it occassionally, when I really need to do very detailed adjustments. But I am enormously pleased with what I can do in Lightroom alone. I use LR for about 90% of the images I process.
In the image above, I increased the exposure (!), moved the black point (darkening the image, adding contrast), applied a contrast bump with a curves adjustment, slightly adjusted the saturation, clarity (mid-tone contrast), added a bit of subtle vignetting.
Scott



Dec 28, 2008 at 08:53 AM
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p.1 #10 · last trip thru asia


Thanks, I welcome any and all C&C from you. Maybe I'll take a look at LR. robert


Dec 28, 2008 at 09:40 AM
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p.1 #11 · last trip thru asia


My favorite is the 2nd one, with the lamps. Perhaps a little unsharp mask and some saturation to punch it up, but the framing is awesome!


Jan 02, 2009 at 06:13 PM





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