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p.1 #1 · Rushing Forward (1)


I'm addicted to editing. No good. Especially when I need to be getting images sorted to print for my portfolio. In any case. This is what caught my eye and was trying to avoid processing. There are a bunch of images from this place. Some of which I've posted, Kukuiula Harbor near Poipu. I 'mine' this place every Weds (was there again yesterday). This is from the 5th. Curious on thoughts. Fairly happy with the way this one turned out. Yay sunset and rocks and water.

aF

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3270/3047491636_fc9fabaeba_o.jpg

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Nov 20, 2008 at 08:19 AM
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p.1 #2 · Rushing Forward (1)


I can see why you mine this area. I love the FG and Mg textures, as well as the whole comp. My only nit would be that OMM the upper mid needs to be toned down a bit, it may not be blown but the contrast is harsh to my eye...JMO mike


Nov 20, 2008 at 09:37 AM
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p.1 #3 · Rushing Forward (1)


Gorgeous foreground. Love the SS effect....works well here. I understand the need
for copy righting however with this image it may be best to sign it in the LRH side.

Al B



Nov 20, 2008 at 11:53 AM
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p.1 #4 · Rushing Forward (1)


Can definitely see why you keep returning here, Aaron.
Lovely light and the fg and ss for the water are terrific.

Barry



Nov 20, 2008 at 12:48 PM
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p.1 #5 · Rushing Forward (1)


Ample foreground, with enough stuff and lines for the eye to follow... I like this a lot


Nov 20, 2008 at 12:49 PM
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p.1 #6 · Rushing Forward (1)


Hey Aaron,

Sweet! I really like the composition here, you did a good job. I do agree with Mike about the area to darken a bit.

So you are addicted to processing? Man I am addicted to shooting... Course then I never have time to process... uggh!

Jim



Nov 20, 2008 at 12:52 PM
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p.1 #7 · Rushing Forward (1)


Very good to hear all :-) Glad this one works. I'm a bit curious which area you both are referring too. No blown areas in the photo. Thanks for the crit!

aF



Nov 20, 2008 at 03:37 PM
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p.1 #8 · Rushing Forward (1)


Hello Aaron,

Love the color and the choice of SS to imply the wave motion. Have you a version from slightly to the right panned left - opening up the path to the sea and putting the bright area in the opening?

hugh



Nov 20, 2008 at 03:39 PM
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p.1 #9 · Rushing Forward (1)


I like this, its got lots going on for the eye to examine.


Nov 20, 2008 at 04:24 PM
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p.1 #10 · Rushing Forward (1)


Love the color transition. The leading lines keep pulling you back to center as well.

Daniel



Nov 20, 2008 at 05:13 PM
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p.1 #11 · Rushing Forward (1)


thanks again


hugh - i was quiet close to a rock wall of sorts but next time i'm down there i'll see if the comp you are referring to is there. many others i will eventually post from this area

david - great website man and flattering comment

thanks dan as well

ttfn

aF



Nov 21, 2008 at 01:11 AM
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p.1 #12 · Rushing Forward (1)


image missing....


Nov 21, 2008 at 01:20 AM
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p.1 #13 · Rushing Forward (1)


all fixed.

sorry about that



Nov 21, 2008 at 05:13 AM
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p.1 #14 · Rushing Forward (1)


uno mas


Nov 21, 2008 at 03:36 PM
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p.1 #15 · Rushing Forward (1)


Sublime. A quintessential beach shot!

Best,

Jose



Nov 21, 2008 at 06:31 PM





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