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C & C welcome.--Frank






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Nov 09, 2008 at 06:46 PM
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I like the composition and idea but the image comes across somewhat wan and pale.I'd like to see it pop a little more.

Best. Bill



Nov 10, 2008 at 02:21 AM
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A really hard shot to pull off ,white on white on white !
You have managed to keep the detail well despite the problems.
I like it a lot. Maybe tweaking the black level will give it something mor but that maybe not what your after
Take care
Mark



Nov 10, 2008 at 04:13 AM
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Bill Sutherland wrote:
I like the composition and idea but the image comes across somewhat wan and pale.I'd like to see it pop a little more.

Best. Bill


Thanks, Bill. I'll work on it.--Frank



Nov 10, 2008 at 08:08 AM
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mark nicoll wrote:
A really hard shot to pull off ,white on white on white !
You have managed to keep the detail well despite the problems.
I like it a lot. Maybe tweaking the black level will give it something mor but that maybe not what your after
Take care
Mark


Thanks, Mark. I'll see what I can do.--Frank



Nov 10, 2008 at 08:08 AM
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I like the concept, shallow focus works surprisingly well, too!


Nov 10, 2008 at 09:41 AM
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I knew this shot would show up eventually. Nicely done however it does look like the Gamma is off or something. has a white overcast throughout the entire picture that may take away from some of the clarity and depth of it? Hard shot here though.

Steve R



Nov 10, 2008 at 10:21 AM
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I like this shot a lot but the purple cast bugs me. IMHO it has no place here.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



Nov 11, 2008 at 09:03 AM
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Love the contrast and depth. Do notice a slight purplish tint, oh well.

Nice entry,
Chad



Nov 12, 2008 at 03:15 AM
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ruuskan wrote:
I like the concept, shallow focus works surprisingly well, too!

Thanks, Jouko; I used a macro lens fr this. The color was difficult, but I was able to get the concept I wanted. Thanks for stopping by.--Frank



Nov 12, 2008 at 11:37 AM
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Steven Roberts wrote:
I knew this shot would show up eventually. Nicely done however it does look like the Gamma is off or something. has a white overcast throughout the entire picture that may take away from some of the clarity and depth of it? Hard shot here though.

Steve R


Thanks, Steven. Yes, the color is off, but it's too late to change it now. Your critique is appreciated.--Frank



Nov 12, 2008 at 11:38 AM
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Yakim Peled wrote:
I like this shot a lot but the purple cast bugs me. IMHO it has no place here.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.


Thanks for the honest critique, Yakim. Yes, the photo has no place here, but I have to go with it anyway.--Frank



Nov 12, 2008 at 11:39 AM
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Chad Schulz wrote:
Love the contrast and depth. Do notice a slight purplish tint, oh well.

Nice entry,
Chad


Thanks, Chad, for your efforts to always comment on the photos. You are right, but I have to go with the off-color because it's too late to change now. Take care.--Frank



Nov 12, 2008 at 11:41 AM
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FJR1 wrote:
Thanks for the honest critique, Yakim. Yes, the photo has no place here, but I have to go with it anyway.--Frank


Haven't I been clear enough? I do like the pic. I just think it would look better in white.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.




Nov 13, 2008 at 02:43 AM





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