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mlenny
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p.1 #1 · Season's progressing


I posted this in Nature, and then I noticed similar captures on this forum so I decided to post it here as this now seems to be the appropriate venue. CC and your time appreciated


Oct 15, 2008 at 08:37 PM
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p.1 #2 · Season's progressing


I like the idea a lot. Two things I noticed though. The image appears a little bit underexposed. It is also a shame that the brightest leaf is cut off. That leaf would make a super main object but it would have to be placed better.
Ute



Oct 16, 2008 at 01:05 AM
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p.1 #3 · Season's progressing


I agree with Ute, the idea here is really nice, but definately adjust the curves on this and get it to brighten up a bit. The hard thing I have found on shots like this is to find which to really focus on and to use as a focal point. I don't quite see that here. Not sure what you had to play with, but there is a large face up red leaf in the lower left. Having that be a little more central in the shot would make a good focal point for the viewers eyes to wander to.

Jim



Oct 16, 2008 at 03:47 AM





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