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p.1 #1 · Nephews Portrait.. Critique please

I did soften it and added a bit of vignetting. Does it work? Any help would be greatly appreciated.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3129/2818872078_0f509f1976.jpg?v=0

Edited by azshutterbug16 on Sep 01, 2008 at 02:33 PM GMT

Edited on Sep 01, 2008 at 04:33 PM

Sep 01, 2008 at 02:31 PM

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p.1 #2 · Nephews Portrait.. Critique please

I like it alot...if I had to critique I wish I could see a little more of his eyes...too much shadow on the left side of his face...but overall I think you did a great job!! Thanks for sharing!!

Sep 01, 2008 at 02:33 PM

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p.1 #3 · Nephews Portrait.. Critique please

Thank you I really appreciate it. The shadow is from a hat he is wearing and the way the flashed bounced it casted that shadow.

Phil

Sep 01, 2008 at 02:35 PM

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p.1 #4 · Nephews Portrait.. Critique please

Hi,

The impression I get from the expression is one of "unease" (almost fear).

I hope this helps you.

Sep 01, 2008 at 06:45 PM

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p.1 #5 · Nephews Portrait.. Critique please

Gotcha

Thank you for your help.

-Phil

Sep 01, 2008 at 08:13 PM


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