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Archive 2008 · some Seniors from this week

  
 
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p.1 #1 · some Seniors from this week


C&C always welcome

#1


#2


#3


#4


#5



Aug 25, 2008 at 07:28 AM
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p.1 #2 · some Seniors from this week


Nice series.

#4 is outstanding



Aug 25, 2008 at 07:35 AM
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p.1 #3 · some Seniors from this week


j.curtis wrote:
Nice series.

#4 is outstanding



+1



Aug 25, 2008 at 11:16 AM
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p.1 #4 · some Seniors from this week


I very much like the concept of #1.
#4 is great! (nice angle)

IMHO the posing of the models in #1 and #2 is too frontal. Maybe you should talk them in other poses where they twist there hips / shoulders more so the shots get more dynamic.

Thanks for sharing




Aug 25, 2008 at 11:22 AM
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p.1 #5 · some Seniors from this week


#4 kills it out of the park for me. it had a wow factor to it when I got to it.... #5 is right behind it too. Not only is the gal great looking but the post production is crispy-clean and beautiful.

nice work...

- travis



Aug 25, 2008 at 12:32 PM
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p.1 #6 · some Seniors from this week


#4 is a classic, but you might want to use liquify to enlarge her pupils slightly. Her eyes look a bit strange as they are right now.

I also agree that the poses in the first two could use some work. #2 is simply not flattering, and the rose on the left should act as a frame, not as a barrier that blocks the subject.

Thanks for posting.



Aug 25, 2008 at 01:19 PM
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p.1 #7 · some Seniors from this week


Nice mix - 1,3 and 4 are best of the lot. The senior in 4 is very pretty, she will look great in any pose


Aug 25, 2008 at 03:57 PM
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p.1 #8 · some Seniors from this week


Number 4 is my favorite. 5 is good also.

However, in my opinion, number 2 is awful and I'm not talking about the photograph. That outfit makes her look very heavy, almost like a maternity top. Just my opinion. Do others think that outfit makes her look heavy or pregnant?



Aug 25, 2008 at 04:02 PM
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p.1 #9 · some Seniors from this week


I couldn't add to all these. They are so right!


Aug 25, 2008 at 05:01 PM
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p.1 #10 · some Seniors from this week


Very nice work! As the others have said, #4 is wonderful! Great composition and expression.

Tim



Aug 25, 2008 at 05:04 PM
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p.1 #11 · some Seniors from this week


JayDavis wrote:
Number 4 is my favorite. 5 is good also.

However, in my opinion, number 2 is awful and I'm not talking about the photograph. That outfit makes her look very heavy, almost like a maternity top. Just my opinion. Do others think that outfit makes her look heavy or pregnant?


Those "maternity looking tops" are what the kids are wearing these days. I don't get it either.



Aug 25, 2008 at 05:12 PM
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p.1 #12 · some Seniors from this week


4 is great!!

Number 1 I find myself drawn to the sun more then the person, I just find it over powering in the photo.

#5 is nice but I wish she had even a little smile on her face.



Aug 25, 2008 at 07:53 PM
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p.1 #13 · some Seniors from this week


these are all great...the second one has great DOF


Aug 29, 2008 at 12:48 AM
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p.1 #14 · some Seniors from this week


tomrock wrote:
Those "maternity looking tops" are what the kids are wearing these days. I don't get it either.




Well you would think that the girl or the girl's mother would realize that the top she is wearing, whether it is in style or not, makes her look heavy and not a very pleasing photograph.



Aug 30, 2008 at 10:07 AM
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p.1 #15 · some Seniors from this week


tomrock wrote:
Those "maternity looking tops" are what the kids are wearing these days. I don't get it either.


I have to agree with Jay. she doesn't look the slightest bit into this at all. She looks very unhappy.



Aug 30, 2008 at 11:36 AM
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p.1 #16 · some Seniors from this week


Agree with the maternity look, I thought she was pregnant looking at that pic.

#5 my fav, with 4 close behind



Aug 30, 2008 at 12:25 PM





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