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Archive 2008 · Second try with Neutral Density

  
 
Taylor Barrett
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p.1 #1 · Second try with Neutral Density


Round 1 was not so good so here is my second attempt. I like these more, and the affect seems quite a bit more meaningful and evident. 30 second shutter speeds at around f/11.

These are all very cropped due to the houses/trees etc that were at the bottom of the frame.

I love the car lights over the bridge on this one:
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3179/2675824890_90d882534c_b.jpg


Same with the car lights and I also like the smooth reflections:
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3009/2675826114_a381fffaf4_b.jpg


As always, constructive comments are happily accepted.

#3 from 7/16
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3216/2675817281_736a87ed44_b.jpg


Edited by Taylor Barrett on Jul 16, 2008 at 10:04 PM GMT

Edited on Jul 17, 2008 at 01:04 AM



Jul 16, 2008 at 06:52 PM
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p.1 #2 · Second try with Neutral Density


much better than the first. Heres a little advice that I usually follow, picture in your mind what you want the scene to look like, then use the correct lens and exposure to accomplish that.


Jul 16, 2008 at 08:23 PM
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p.1 #3 · Second try with Neutral Density


+1 much better demonstration

Guy



Jul 16, 2008 at 08:29 PM
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p.1 #4 · Second try with Neutral Density


Nice one! I'd be tempted to clone out the moving boat lights toward the bottom of the first image, or try it again without boats moving in those prominent spots.

Edited on Jul 16, 2008 at 09:41 PM



Jul 16, 2008 at 09:17 PM
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p.1 #5 · Second try with Neutral Density


I agree with Guy, this time the effect is a lot better visible. Well done!


Jul 16, 2008 at 10:07 PM
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p.1 #6 · Second try with Neutral Density


Nice shots, looks like fun, I may have to give it a try.

Terry



Jul 16, 2008 at 11:30 PM
Taylor Barrett
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p.1 #7 · Second try with Neutral Density


Added one from the depths of night to the original post.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3216/2675817281_736a87ed44_b.jpg



Jul 17, 2008 at 01:05 AM
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p.1 #8 · Second try with Neutral Density


awesome photographs!


Jul 17, 2008 at 03:51 AM
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p.1 #9 · Second try with Neutral Density


Is it just me or are the horizon lines crooked? Other than the buildings being tilted on the first two, these are very nice


Jul 17, 2008 at 04:08 AM
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p.1 #10 · Second try with Neutral Density


Wow I just saw your first try and now this, your second try... no comparison! Great job, those pics look ready to be printed I especially like the first one

Edited on Jul 17, 2008 at 07:16 AM



Jul 17, 2008 at 07:16 AM
Taylor Barrett
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p.1 #11 · Second try with Neutral Density


Daniel K wrote:
Is it just me or are the horizon lines crooked? Other than the buildings being tilted on the first two, these are very nice


I'm really not sure. I tried to line the tree line up straight horizontally but in the process some other things got crooked. I think its just a byproduct of a hilly landscape. Thanks for the positive comments as well



Jul 17, 2008 at 11:03 AM
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p.1 #12 · Second try with Neutral Density


Taylor these are great shots indeed, with my only nitpick being that I'd straighten the horizon a little bit... these all seem to be sloping downhill to the right a bit. Check the buildings on the left top, or the bridge support poles, as a reference (and generally on a wide angle the left side will tilt left a little with natural distortion). NX has an excellent auto-straighten feature if you use NX.

Otherwise, these shots are excellent and a great scene.

Cheers.

*EDIT - just read your comment at the end there - sorry for not reading through. I still maintain it's tilted slightly, if you look at those buildings on the first shot with the bluer sky... regardless, nice work!

Edited on Jul 17, 2008 at 11:57 AM



Jul 17, 2008 at 11:56 AM





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