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Crystalography
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p.1 #1 · light trail


this picture is a bit sketchy, any tips on how to improve it?






Jul 08, 2008 at 02:26 AM
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p.1 #2 · light trail


Tough thing to do - to fix it. Under the trees is overexposed. The foreground trees looks soft.

What are the details - use tripod?, shutter, lens, fstop

If reshooting I would use a nd grad filter upside down or the flash. The biggest challenge is that under the trees is overexposed but exposing less will underexpose the leaves. Thus a flash with a lower exposure might help or the upside down nd grad.

Softness on trees either suggests a slow shutter hand held or need for higher fstop.

I played with it in photoshop but was not able to solve the overexposure below tree because it was so severe.

Converting to b/w helps a bit but still looks to overexposed under trees.





Jul 08, 2008 at 07:42 PM
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p.1 #3 · light trail


^thanks for the advice, I will definetly try using flash next time.
Wow, haha, I dont think I can do a slow shutter hand held, I can barely hold a 3 or 4 - shaky hands.
I was mainly trying to get a light trail of the cars, not really worrying about exposure and such, but this was the best shot I got out of the series I took, but still a bit sketchy.





Edited on Jul 08, 2008 at 09:28 PM



Jul 08, 2008 at 09:26 PM
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p.1 #4 · light trail


My first question was what you were trying to accomplish with the picture.

If it's the light trails of the cars, try a new composition that emphasizes those. I would try to find a dark background that they will show up well against. For example, you could show from above so that they are against the dark pavement, or you could find a long dark colored wall that isn't lit, and shoot them against that. With this shot, in order to have a long enough exposure for the car lights, you end up with a really bright background that the lights disappear in (I didn't really even notice they were there until your second post where you said that you were trying to show them).



Jul 08, 2008 at 10:25 PM





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