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Archive 2008 · Bee on the lookout

  
 
Ariel Bravy
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p.1 #1 · Bee on the lookout


Hey guys, I've never really posted to this section, but I'd like to get some feedback so I'm gonna start posting images right off my photoblog. Feedback in any form is welcomed and appreciated.

http://www.arielbravy.com/photoblog/images/20080629033731_bee_lookout.jpg



Jun 30, 2008 at 01:28 AM
redal
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p.1 #2 · Bee on the lookout


I feel my eye being dragged away from the bee by the flowers in the background, maybe if you had got lower and used the main flower to block the others , and also that would get the bee up against the green background to separate it from the petals a little more.


Jun 30, 2008 at 04:02 AM
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p.1 #3 · Bee on the lookout


you know that would make a nice cover for a childrens book "The Flower and the Bee"
I like the pic the way it is...



Jun 30, 2008 at 07:03 PM
Ariel Bravy
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p.1 #4 · Bee on the lookout


Thank guys.


Jul 01, 2008 at 08:16 AM
Scott Stoness
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p.1 #5 · Bee on the lookout


For me picture is nice but it just feels a bit too soft.

I would crop off right so it is less centred to grass petal.



Jul 05, 2008 at 01:01 PM





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