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Archive 2008 · Macro Shots

  
 
dalgin
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p.1 #1 · Macro Shots


PLEASE C&C... Thanks

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Edited by dalgin on Jun 09, 2008 at 02:27 PM GMT



Jun 09, 2008 at 12:52 PM
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p.1 #2 · Macro Shots


I'll try to comment after a closer look later.
Could you leave EXIF info in the meantime?

Scott G



Jun 09, 2008 at 01:36 PM
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p.1 #3 · Macro Shots


100mm F2.8 @ F12
Canon 40D



Jun 09, 2008 at 02:02 PM
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p.1 #4 · Macro Shots


I'm no Macro expert, although I own the lens you have used. I have not done much Macro for several reasons:
Very difficult to get sharp enough images hand-held; I often dont have patience for a tripod. Sometimes the subjects dont either.
Lighting is challenging, esp if you are hand-held and stopped down, to try to have more than razor-thin depth of field. Ringflash, off-camera flash is often used.
There is info on Macro resources at the top of the Macro Forum page.

1. Very good. Nice sharpness. You've been able to keep the plane of the lens close to that of the dragonfly. Compositionally, I think you need a bit more room at the top and could use less on the bottom. You might even recrop as a panroama style image.
2. Not enough in focus. Since you are working with very shallow DOF, I think you should try to get the head/eyes as the area of sharpest focus.
4. Pretty good. You have set the challenge for yourself very high, attempting to capture the length in focus. You might try more images from head back and not worry about the sharpness as you move away from the head.
6. Interesting. Needs some processing to increase contrast.
8. Getting there; closer to a more common Macro framing with eye(s) in focus.

I think you need to continue to work on capturing the insects head on or more symmetrically from above. Even with bug shots, "eye contact" is a real plus.

Scott G



Edited on Jun 10, 2008 at 07:28 PM



Jun 10, 2008 at 06:51 PM
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p.1 #5 · Macro Shots


For best feedback post 3 or less in similar theme, provide exif and ask specific questions.

1 is good. Lots of room under for gravity. Perhaps a bit more space above would improve.

2 seems soft on head and wings.

3 seems soft on head which is kind of a focal point

4 is my favorite of the bunch. Clear head nice colors. Would be better with head on angle.

5 is nice but seems a bit soft.

All seem like they need checking for levels - moving triangles in to histgram and maybe more saturation.

And I agree with Scott, although I am also not very experienced with macro, I think the head should be sharp.




Jun 11, 2008 at 12:18 AM
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p.1 #6 · Macro Shots


Thanks alot for all your comments guys.

I am working on getting used to focusing to a very small area and holding the camera still. it is very hard



Jun 11, 2008 at 09:45 AM
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p.1 #7 · Macro Shots


I've found the trick with anything that has eyes (two or more) that you really need to get those in focus, even if everything else is not.

I'm also a bug person and love seeing other macro shots of interesting bugs.



Jun 13, 2008 at 10:13 AM
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p.1 #8 · Macro Shots


I like scott, found them a little soft. Also, since the eye draws the attention of the viewer, I found in most cases the eyes of the dragon flies were a little too close to the edge. I would have used the rule of thirds and tryed to put the eye on a grid intersection.


Jun 14, 2008 at 05:57 PM
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p.1 #9 · Macro Shots


dalgin wrote:
Thanks alot for all your comments guys.

I am working on getting used to focusing to a very small area and holding the camera still. it is very hard


Yes, handheld macro/close-ups are really really tough .

One additional input I have is to come parallel to the body of the damsel to achieve the head to tail focus. It takes practice and sometime to master this.



Jun 22, 2008 at 10:04 PM
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p.1 #10 · Macro Shots


Wow, the intense colors and textures of the last one make it impressive.


Jun 22, 2008 at 10:09 PM
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p.1 #11 · Macro Shots


3 & 5. The others take too long to load. Next time try posting at a lower resolution.

You should also sharpen the images a bit



Jun 30, 2008 at 04:49 AM





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