Nice shot.
It would be a stronger image if the horizon line were not dead-center, and if the curve of the camels was going into the picture instead of out of it.
Good luck,
Carrol
Jun 05, 2008 at 10:06 AM
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I really like the tone and feel of this shot. It does make you feel lost and because of that I like the camel train going out of the picture as it sort of depicts going off into nowhere. I do agree with Carrol about the horizon, however. I would love to see about half of the sky cropped out--I think it is your fantastic capture of the dessert and not the sky that makes this shot work, anyway. Good luck this week.
Agree with Steve and Carrol about elements of the composition that they have mentioned. I also feel (I am probably wrong) that the camels look like they have been placed there, almost cloned in. Could be my monitor, could be my aging eyes!!
