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Archive 2008 · Is this too soft?

  
 
ALAN ROYCE
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p.1 #1 · Is this too soft?


Here's one more from the local hills. It was misty that morning, and the chance of getting a super sharp imaged was nil. Do you think that the softness adds to the mood, or do I need to try it again on a clearer morning?

Alan



May 29, 2008 at 04:47 PM
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #2 · Is this too soft?


Hi Alan,

Here's one worked up a little - levels & sharpening - don't really know what you had in mind when you captured the image...I guess in terms of focus, it's still somewhat 'soft'

http://www.aug.edu/rjarman/Photos/FM_POSTS/250570_copy.jpg

Bob

Edited on May 29, 2008 at 07:09 PM



May 29, 2008 at 07:08 PM
Alan321
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p.1 #3 · Is this too soft?


It's not too soft but it also doesn't clearly say to me "this was taken on a misty morning". It would work better if there was a bit of fog in the valleys, for example. It could just as easily have been taken in late afternoon on a hazy day.

I'd do it again on a clear morning just so that I'd know how much better it might be - and yet it might not be any better.

- Alan



May 31, 2008 at 07:06 AM
Scott Stoness
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p.1 #4 · Is this too soft?


It is a bit small too tell if it is too soft but it does look soft which likely means its going to be very soft when it is bigger. I would try a reshoot - it is a nice scene.

What direction are you looking - an hour earlier or later might be better.



Jun 02, 2008 at 11:07 PM
James Grimm
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p.1 #5 · Is this too soft?


Alan,

Yeah, it's too soft. And I personally wasn't a big fan of Bob's sharpened version -- too grainy, IMO. Maybe try to go the other way -- make it softer and see what you find then. You might also check out some B&W versions too. The light on the foreground hills looks like it might yield something nice in some form of B&W.

Cheers,
James



Jun 03, 2008 at 06:34 PM
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p.1 #6 · Is this too soft?


i think you cut the image on the prettiest hill.. just look more towards the right side and that smooth pic woulda been awesome. So I think smooth is nice.

Edited on Jun 06, 2008 at 04:18 AM



Jun 06, 2008 at 04:17 AM
Jo Dilbeck
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p.1 #7 · Is this too soft?


I think somewhere between your original and Bob's rework would be nice. Your copy is just a little "dull", with a bit of additional lighting on the hills, but not as much as Bob's, it would brighten it up a bit. I do wish there was just a bit more mist/fog for effect, I like the soft ethereal look with fog.

Jo



Jun 10, 2008 at 10:04 PM





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