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Archive 2008 · Arches

  
 
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p.1 #1 · Arches


I've been hanging around these forums for a while, just looking at the pictures, and trying to improve my technique. I think it is wonderfully to see some of your fantastic work, and so I though I'd get involved! I know I'm not as good as most of you (yet), but someday I hope to become a high-school photography teacher. I got my first slr on December 27th, 2007 (I will never forget the day ).... I'd love to get some critiques on my images, and I find you get better ones when you post photos individually, but right now I'm just too impatient to wait and make another thread, so I'm going to start with a few that I took in Moab UT (near Arches National Park)

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I'd love to hear any comments you have, constructive criticism is always welcome!


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Edited on May 21, 2008 at 05:09 PM



May 21, 2008 at 05:08 PM
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p.1 #2 · Arches


Welcome babyjax14. Great to have you jumping in with both feet. I particularly enjoy your presentation/composition of #3, and also the forground detail in #2. Looking forward to seeing more. Best wishes. -Art


May 21, 2008 at 05:19 PM
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p.1 #3 · Arches


Thank you


May 21, 2008 at 05:28 PM
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p.1 #4 · Arches


I love #1 and #3. #2 is a little busy in the foreground where the top limbs go into the shadow of the hills. Maybe if taken from a lower angle where the limbs would go into the sky....


May 21, 2008 at 05:34 PM





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